Slightly confused at what im reading. Im at chapter 205 and literally the world building of this novel leaves much to desire. The premise of the book definitely starts off on a high note but at some point as a reader you literally say aloud “wtf is going on?!”. Theres no foreshadowing to speak of, the mc deviates between natural speech to prim and proper “ye old english” with bits of slang thrown in here and there and to cap it all of… the MC Is the stereotypical beta character who is 90% of his time thinking self deprecating thoughts but “some how” will pull the occasional confidence out nowhere. I find myself asking myself is he weak, irresponsible, secretly clever or just dense. i understand the mechanics of how a flawed character should behave as there are plenty of light novels that have this character motif of weak to strong (i.e second coming of Gluttony, Devils Son in Law, etc) but this MC leaves me literally flabbergasted. Its not a bad novel per se but i feel the MC is tryibg hard at being something he isnt. Eventually i will come back to this book perhaps but for me personally i just think unless you can deal with a typical beta MC who maybe through some past life act of valor (saving a universe, stopping Thanos’s snap, or defeating truck-kun) somehow ended up in a harem but not a harem (as some of the characters are plainly disrespectful or love him for absolutely no reason that can be found at all) that maybe this book isnt for you. Apologies to the author if this criticism is too harsh but im actually trying to temain objective about the failing points while remaining polite. TYVM.
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
It was a good story 4/5 I really liked iteverytime i hear you say "this is where i end this what if" i think ah yes that 1 part was 6 hours indeed
The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, ? I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️ in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️
It has great potential... I cant wait for more chapters to be released. It can be a Gem and compete with top novels if the development is done well.
It was confusing initially, but as the characters grow, we get to know more about the world. Great story! Definitely recommend it to anyone who likes kingdom building.
The style of writing is simply good, neat and quite good written. First, the premise is good, intriguing synopsis and good first chapter, it could be personal, I think you can find better cover. The interaction between characters is interesting and good written, the description is pretty solid as one could feel the atmosphere in the story. Overall, good read. Good luck.
average system xianxia transmigration... nothing really new or outstanding in this one... plus it is completed. compared to trash webnovel has been putting out lately this one can be considered masterpiece... and it has ok translations...
Mc's way too much of a coward. He never takes risks which makes it boring. Low-profile is okay but you gotta step up sometimes you know. Such a bummer
like I've requested of the author before , let the stories include more breast sucking and fondling and more explicit scenes .. lovely stories most of them but more of a repetition .
An excellent and good novel and a novel that is not without the latest. But what I hate about the novel is Sera's character. You know that your whole life is suffering and suffering and no one at that time can help you. He's just watching you ache, your skin sloughing off, your bones severing, and he's waiting for your strength to wake up. What if it takes so long for him to wake up. I don't see the difference between her and that crazy doctor. Especially when you wear that cute and sincere smile that disgusts me
Name: 我真的天贼一般
Author: 热心的三老师 Lv.3
Chapters: 553(1.45 million words)
Status: Completed