Esperava outra coisa quando comecei a ler, mesmo assim dei uma chance, contudo não foi do meu agrado, então decidi parar de ler. Pode ser que está fanfic seja do seu gosto.
I truly love this MC. especially his rage.
But author don't make it go downhill due to romance
Anyway overall story is interesting.
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Wow. The story revolves around six couples! That’s amazing!
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grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers.
some cringy moments .
Very clear writing style and world building. It's one of if not the best novel I have read for now. The plot and character are absolutely perfect. It's clearly a gem among the novel of this platform.
Okay, here’s my honest review. I’ll start with the title. “Miracles on Mysterious Mars”, sounds kinda interesting. It means that the setting will be in outer space. Next, the synopsis, I like that it’s short, concise, and direct to the point. It also mentioned that it’s in the year 2080, so I expect some futuristic gadgets and other sciency stuff. Lastly, the prologue, or was that chapter 1? I was confused. Also, though the grammar is passable, there were a lot of punctuation misplacements. Also, a piece of advice, instead of using (!!!) and (???) for unnamed characters, it’s better to use (Person A) and (Person B).
Anyway, keep it up and keep improving, author!!
Story of an arrogantly sexy devil and a mysterious witch who seems to make
her way toward the celibate devil with her human behaviour. This is 2nd book of the Devil-witch series of mynovel20. Already got hooked. No doubt about the author's capability. Congratulations and all the best to my author for this another new journey.?
At first when I started reading this novel, I was going in blind, sort off. Only glossed over the synopsis and was interesting enough so I started to read. I was surprised about the subtle plot twists and turns, it betrayed every expectation I had, truly a nice surprise. What I like most about this novel is the suspension, it really held me on the edge of my seat. The MC is also very smart and calculating, another plus. As I'm writing this review from chapter 42, I'm curious to see how this story develops. Anyways author-san, keep up the good work!
would've liked to read more but from chapter 6 onwards it's locked so not gonna waste my time and money incase it turns out to be bad that's all I have to say
waiting for more chapters. ..........
Novel is decent not good or bad but the characters are awful just in the 25 chapters here I wanted to smack the author the world I’m not sure about yet and the translation and editing is decent