A fantasy novel set in a video game world is nothing original, but how my story will be told certainly is. It will be from an NPC's perspective, and what the players see is vastly different to what the NPCs experience.My English is at native-level, unlike some cancer on this site.Enjoy it or don't. Feel free to reply with questions, feedback, or the usual spam.
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong???
This is quite a good story about a cultivation world. With good writing quality and story development. The characters design is quite at an average quality. But the stability of chapters release is bad.
I love how their story went because it's so refreshing.it has something that other story (mostly) doesn't have?I love it. So please continue writing this story cause it's fun to read?
The story is creeping AF. My instinct feel terrifying by reading this story, Keep updating and never give up for the author! This is my comment about your story, Hope you like it. ???
Writing is neat and good choices of words that could easily understand by the readers. The narration took a bit serious in the beginning but the author made sure to explain his/her ideas about the plotline, it is quite descriptive in fact, though long sentences sometimes bores the eyes, the story piques interest! A good read, keep up the work dear author!???
Really inspiring and interesting..I think it'll be the most rated novel in the future. Love Thomas character seems bit funny. Rejected piece hahaha.
I can easily draw my thought about this novel, well till now it's pretty fascinating and interesting the same. At the beginning I thought that it would be generic with the plotline but after all it ended up being an interesting story with a relatable main character at the beginning but in the process he got a great character development, from a selfish person changed to a really classmate person who cares about the others. My overall opinion is that it's really good novel I have no complaints about the story or sum, ofc some parts may they had their flaws like all the stories, keep in mind there's no a flawless story (yeah even Berserk has its flaws). I would give it objectively a 7,9/10 writing wise (Idk if I'm being strict but that's how I am) enjoyment wise would be a 9+ tho.
Revenge and hate, this is the main theme that author used to write this story. it felt simple and cliche but still interesting. How cliche is it? MC is orphaned and raised by monster, and it killed by human, so he started to hate human and kill them because of it. What make it interesting is how good the execution is. Its not about "look the MC is going to take revenge and start to killing human," but its about "The MC has killed human, so what is the consequence to that child as human? for being a murderer of the same species?"The MC has killed some human, and the family of the human he killed is trying to chase him too. This is where world building and character development works, and author did not disappoint.
Loving it so far looking forward to more!! when are the updates going to be? and I love how the character is your typical good guy! really recommend this!
This is definitely a must read. The pacing of the story is very well done. Not only does the author create a very believable world background, but builds up ******* and atmosphere that is expected of the genre.The characters so far are lively in their own sense and there is no lack of conspiracies and back stabbing potential for an interesting villain and protagonist clashes. Look forward to seeing this story through.
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