I am curious though.
'This guy really is a woman magnet. Everywhere he go, girls will flock to him. What is so good about this guy anyway?' Sienna thought, while the unwell feeling in her heart kept growing. Sienna didn't know since when, but this weird feeling has been haunting her. She can't really explain what exactly it is, but she really felt scared of Charles now. She felt that she need to be more cautious around Charles now.
Everyone was stupefied.When she saw that nobody move, she shouted again. "Are you deaf?! I said treat her!"
Website : qidian china Views : 6.70 million Rating : 8.3(1575) Chapters : 502 Status : completed Word count : 1.58 million author rank : platinum
The Patriarch of the Hero Bloodline having 32 wives is aura dawg ?! Let's see where this goes!
The concept of the story is good, but maybe the author can find their own way to make it unique.Honestly, the convo is a bit too much, maybe the author can find their own way to simplify or improve them.Then for the last, please tidy up the paragraph arrangement like separate something like [...] from the paragraph to make it more clear
hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
love your writing and story telling!!!❤️
its a good and interesting novel, its just non-virgin fmc is not something i can like and ruins it, if you can tolerate it then its fine but then again why would you read fantasy lol.
Seriously the best detective online novel I’ve ever read.Don’t drop it and keep up the good work.
I hope you write at least 1500 chapters cuz I'm hooked. Definitely one of the best novels I've read. Love the world-building, Abaddon, his wives and his interaction with his children. There's a ton of mythology which you've seamlessly integrated like the different pantheons and the abyss. It's so rare to find a dragon mc that actually behaves like a proper dragon with all the greediness, sometimes impetuous and ofc is reasonably op. Ignore the haters because they will never offer constructive criticism and they have nothing to accomplish in their lives so they try to make other people miserable and drag them down. You just focus on your health and please keep writing this gem.
as someone who dosent actualy enjoy fishing I find ur story enjoyable so far and I hope u stick to the whole fishing thing uv got going on on 5 chapters in so that's why I gave u all 4s not really enough to properly judge for most of them catagories yet