The book itself as a good storyline and it streamlined wellufffc; also the story chapters were just about the right size and length for leisurely reading.ufffc
I only read to like chapter 10 (and I can usually read a good 30-40 chapters before I make my decision) and I had to stop it was so terribly cliche it wouldnt even qualify for a mediocre face slapping novel I have honestly never seen a translated work that was so cookie cutter to cultivation novel cliches and STILL not have any flavor like at all **** was literally like "oh no I'm a simp and I've been ntr'd by some young master and the girl likes him too it was a trap to take advantage of me so now she's a slut everyone around is trash and after my first near death encounter I get heavenly defying powers and don't even flinch guess all I can do is just effortlessly swat away stepping Stones for cheap power ups and any fight that would actually pose a challenge doesn't have anything to do with my skill and talent but my op powers takes care of it cause why not also don't forget that my cultivation system is vague af and all we get told is sutra name the cultivation stages literally nothing else and I have no doubt down the line (as seen in the ongoing 7k chapters) that to him these stages actually mean nothing cause when he'll get to core formation equivalant TM he'll be stronger than everybody on the planet cause of [insert nonsensical cultivation technique power up or miscellaneous power up encounter]" this is quite literally like my second or third review I've left for a book on this app and I've been around since it started and this terrible novel has made me so infuriated with it's less than mediocre quality that I typed this out...Translation quality was pretty good tho solid B at least
Just Amazing. It's like I am the main character.Though the only reason the overall rating is 4.5 is because of the updates.Overall I say "Keep it up!"
Yeah, no. The author probably decided to give up on the novel and thus introduce a second system mc. Was pretty good till this point, though no point in reading it further. Good luck.
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I dont know about the author affecting his rating by creating alt accounts. if thats true, its pretty scummy. His story on the other hand is also pretty scummy.The quality of the writing is not bad, i can understand whats going on even with the weird time jumps. The problem for me is that i just cant get behind the underlying meaning and essence of this story.The author's writing comes across the page like a child trying to write like an ***** to justify that he understands existentialism, with banal prose about an unjust universe. The main character is evil, and doesnt really have any sort of weight or qualms about it. He goes from normal all his life to murder without any character justification. Being evil and mc is fine, there are a bunch of those and I have no problem with it. Yet, this novel really makes being evil so uninteresting.The MCs main conviction is that the world owes him something. What?!His life is of someone being pampered and rich with no real suffering. Yet, it sucks cause he is so untalented and its unfair. BooHoo, whine, whine, whine. Its also really annoying to read, that this whiny child then gets a chance to change his life with help from a god like being. So does the character learn anything, strive for anything, or go out there and try to be better. The short anwser is no. He arrives in a land of magic which is almost identical to his own world, but there is magic. Is it difficult for him in any sense to navigate this new world? Nope. Is there any problem with him trying to get magical powers. HaHa..., no. He has money, logistics, and manpower rightoff the bat. To then literally discover how magic is created in humans after sacrificing vagrants and the homeless. I would also like to mention that he was given some weird ethereal power for guessing things, and then he would be provided a either hot or cold response by better google.He doesnt earn anything and is given everything on silver platter. He is unapologetic with his whining about how he is special when a god like being tells him he isnt. He is just the worst.if you like that sorta thing, this is your novel. i couldnt make it that far in. if the novel progresses in a way later down the line to play on those themes and maybe have some character growth. thats awesome. Im just not down to go on that ride.
I read the first 20 chapters and I feel a little familiar with the author's storytelling style. Do you know what the first 20 chapters achieved: making the reader emotional with the face slapping style typical of light novels. The author directly creates a story where the MC succeeds in making a great work and the rest is where the work is tested then the NPCs around act like keyboard warrior commentators where most of them are tasked with mocking the MC for the sake of building face-slapping emotional momentum. There is no depth to the story, just a story of brain pain. I have a feeling that the next chapters will also repeat like this.
Nice story and overall it's a great read. The plot is unique and enjoyable.The characters are well set , but, are bit compounded. However, that's cool as well. KEEP UP THE WORK !!
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
won't lie I've read less than 10 chapters but so far it's pretty much an exact copy of Dungeon Hunter which while I admit was a great read I'm in no mood to read a reskinned copied version of it
Read the first few chapters and liked it but the story but the multiple POV is not to my liking. Single, third party POV would have been better.
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