i started reading, since idea of mc making things up and his disciples making it work was awesome.i dropped it, since it always ends up in disciples killing people and shittalking.for me it is too much uninteresting parts to continue.even creating new cultivation paths ended up skewed from how it was at start which made it even worse.
this is a really fun novel lol can't wait for more
I must say that I've been waiting 3 full weeks before this book obtained enouth votes, si I am happy now. I'll go to the main points now, first on the wrighting qualty, wile I've been reading books in english for three years now, I can't say I'm proficient in ortograph so my point of view may not be of interest to you but so far, I didn't see notable mistakes.Second as the book just started being translated we can't be sure about the stability of updates but I'll just say that the 18th chapter was updated 20 hours ago while the 17th was 10 hours ago, not saying it is bad, but it may be bad.For the story developpement, it's fine, I mean, in other books the mc is like "I'm hearing voices and seeing floating textes, fine I'll follow their orders" while the corect thing to think is "am I crazy? Like, in my brain?" But some weirds happening, the sister of the unicorn man find the mc's house but I don't remember the mc telling them where he lives. But overall, it's okay.For the character desing, well the mc is the classical "I don't talk much and I'm cold headed and I'm beautifull" but you now what, I don't hate what is classical! but he is a bit lucky, beeing choosen out of a full room of doctors and interns to help,while he was playing on is phone, I'm okay withe the fact that a girl will mostly go to a charming guy, but when it comes to work, you won't takes the risk to bring someone who is playing on his phone at work to help just because he is dashing, your putting yourself in danger of being fired.For the world backgroud I don't know, it seems futuristic with the transformers (I don't now about others countrys but in france transformers are a bunch of giant robots who can transform in vehicles) but my lack of medical knowledge stop me from judging anithing about the hospital.All in all, It's very good for now, and I'm waiting to see what's next! (I hope the 19th chapter will be out before the 20th)
After countless waves of 'coming soon' trash novels, finally a novel genre I like is gonna be translated. Super OP mc trying to be normal. I shall vote for its probable comedic element?
read up to chaptor 21 which is the most updated chaptor right now. I can say I really like the plot, and the ideas that the author seems to try to be going with. with that said though, 4 chaptors of what I would call worthless back story is kinda a let down. I can see certain back stories in the future but 1 back story taking up 3 chaptors alone is a problem. that back story was not needed tbh. I just feel 3 chaptors were wasted on which could have been action or something else. chaptor 21 is also a start of another back story so we will get atleast 5 or 6 chaptors in a row of back story that is prolly wasted chaptors. good thing is atleast I am not paying for it or I would be a unhappy camper.
More chapters please more stable uploads &if you don’t have time or if you have school then at least 1 chapter is enough.
There were words on my screen. I read them all till chapter 10. However, all I could hear was an author w@nking off.Inflated numbers, inflated ego. Everyone is a dumb monkey while MC is a monkey king. Here, the author unknowingly admits what a trash gamer MC is who can't play games unless he cheats: “Black Gold System? Wasn’t this the system of a single-player game that he had played before?That game was developed by a friend of his, and he asked Richard to try it out. However, due to the difficulty of the game, Richard complained a few times, so the other party specially created this system for him.” The author unknowingly admits here what a trash friend MC is who after gaining a cheat from his friend doesn’t even care to find him or worry about him: “Richard opened [Forum Chat] first. He wanted to know what was going on.” “Some people were at a loss. Many of them kept asking for help in returning to the real world.On the other hand, some ambitious people were eager to try and explore the game world.After looking at the forum for a long time, Richard’s complicated feelings gradually eased up.There were so many people. He was not alone.”Unknowingly, the author admits that MC is a trashy self-absorbed man:“Richard nodded his head in satisfaction. Only weaklings would like a cute beast-eared girl. A real man should fight against a mummy.” A real man would help his friend from whom he got the cheat to dominate the game instead of rating whatever a cute beast-eared girl or mummy if better mob. It is a novel I would recommend to trash enthusiasts. You know who you are and what you like. In the meantime, I'm leaving this dumpster fire alone.
In all my time, I’ve never quite read a book like this. So many books overpromise and flood there stories with far too many genres and tags that character or world developement ends up severely lacking. Not here. This is the only book I have ever read to be able to seamlessly and cohesively string together apocalypse, dungeons, clans, abilities, and steady developement etc and still have an amazingly gripping storyline. The MC is lovestricken but still has the readers rooting for him, and still presents a highly admirable and powerful persona. The ideas the author presents ARE NOT GENERIC. I feel like I speak for everyone when I say we see far too many dungeon and apacolypse stories that all seem poorly thought out and borderline plagiarism on this app. Its like a breath of fresh air to see romance and apocalypse and dungeons presented in a way that I have yet to see anywhere else at such a high level. Author all I can say is thank you and keep up the incredible work. ;)P.S. the only reason for not having a full 5 star review is that we are still discovering the world and therefore not all has been revealed. I also feel like if I’m more honest and realistic the book will gain more traction than with shameless and reasonless 5 star reviews.
DAY 22 OF REQUESTING MLB TO CONTINUE DUAL CULTIVATION............................................................................................
Raven's character just adds more life to the story. I'm enjoying the progression of this story.
I'm super excited what will happen next
Niceeee one