This story is great and for sure deserves to be and eventually will be higher on the ranking (assuming consistent updates). The main reason for this is because until now this story has been written as a web novel and not a regular novel like many of the others have been.
This can be seen from the superb world building which while not particularly in-depth (yet) has laid a wonderful foundation for easy expansion either deeper into the dungeon or up onto the surface and has already shown factions and conflict in the human society allowing for hundreds or perhaps thousands of future chapters. This is usually lacking from other stories in the rankings as even those with a pre-established lore need new areas or factions occasionally and without a foundation it always feels like an ass-pull and will eventually limit their longevity.
The system the mc has, while cliched, also lends itself to the web novel format as it allows the author to show numerically and or cleanly through a menu that the characters are progressing in each chapter meaning daily updates always feel meaningful and not like fluff.
Finally the most impressive thing about this story is the speed at which the character grows, that is to say slowly. Other stories on the rankings almost always show their mc's rocket up in strength to quickly become influential in their world. However I find that this is often short sighted as it hampers world building and longevity as possible enemies quickly become scarce and we never see the prospective of the world as a little guy. This story does not have that problem as the mc is not the strongest and does not seem to be likely to become the strongest any time soon allowing for plenty of interesting hurdles to over come for a long time.
Honestly the only real gripe i have is the ridiculous main character who seems to be both comically unperturbed by his situation (literally) as well as far too eager to enter an unknown ant society. This could be easily remedied however if the author either bluntly stated that being an ant has somehow warped his perception of reality or showed that his sanity was rightfully cracking around the edges but that his silly sense of humor was keeping him together, explaining his constant need for jokes.
**. ALL PRAISE THE MIGHTY GANDALF!!!!! MAY HIS BEARD BE EVER BUSHY AND WHITE
Bro why did mc ban Gurukuls ? Isn't Vijaynagar a Hindu empire ? In his own empire, the mc cannot openly preach Hinduism. He had to stop other educational institution like churches etc to stops birth of foreign ideas and conversion but why gurukuls . And there is no proper explanation of education system. And there is no equality or secularism in 16 th century so that you have to do everything equal for Muslims also. Gurukuls were important parts of Hindu culture and you shut them down . I thing you are just colonising India like British only introducing foreign ideas.
Now you will also start introducing ing Muslims in admiration also . Many still are not loyal to India in today's time and you are expecting them to be loyal in that time.
Plz restart the gurukuls and place on restrictions on communities n harmful for empire. You don't have to worry over equality . You are not in peaceful timewhere you have to to introduce equal policies for all people. You are the king of an empire who have to expand empire either by force or peace and expel all anti Hindu people. Not please them on terms of equality like today's times . If the mcs cannot tolerate bloodshed give the control to other king and only act as a minister. In that time when Muslims rulers commit atrocities on non Muslims, you cannot win over people by peaceful means, mercy and without bloodshed.
You have to be cruel to spill innocent blood also.
Plz reply
Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.
Wayy too much focus on peoples emotions in general. Also the auther cant go 2 paragraphs without mentioning how emotionless or cold the mc is. The more I read the more it feels like this was written by someone without much life experience. Story is too edgy for me im out ?
Been reading this for a few days and it definitely deserves more people reading it since it is a breath of fresh air from the usual novels on here.
It's a murder-mystery/detective story but the story is from the perspective of the Killer our MC. Though there are switches in Pov.
The chapters are long and the author could definitely chop them up to two or three chapters to gain more leeway in writing it, just saying.
But the story is good so far. Would recommend.
For a new author, the book is quite good. It's easy to follow and enjoy even if you aren't interested in military stuffs. I particularly like the camaraderie between the team. Also the strong bond between the Mc and his family.
Can someone do a gooD synopsis plz ??? .....................................................................................................
On the verge of creaming myself knowing the protagonist is a monster! This is a rare occurrence that only blesses us mortals once every heavenly rotation! Praise be the people who picked this!
P.S: Curse the Daoist above me who claimed first review
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
The start is kinda rough but it got a lot of potential just keep writing till the impurities vanished. And don't use so much "He", just describe it in other term and explore ur own style of writing
Really love how to author built the plot and how easy it is to feel immerged in tHat system. Can’t wait to see how the story will deVelope
Since Idk if this has discord then imma ask it here. How many will there in the harem? Im planning on reading it and just had to ask that question bc bigger the harem usually means they get forgotten along the way. Hope it isnt the case tho.