DaoistArborenzB
Every chapter was superb until the end. The most important part where Alex should have met him mother and family, his wife meets her in laws, relationship between Cynthia and Her boyfriend.. At last you made the whole story jumble.. I think you should have continued for at least 10 chpt .
Great story!!! LOVED IT!!! Rue is annoyingly arrogant, vain and juvenile in the beginning but expected as due to her background. She grows up (kind of). Highly recommend
Hi, Y'all!!!!
Long time no see... Sorry it took me so long to edit this story and give it a proper ending (an epilogue as well, a long one). Life happened while I was editing, serious things I had to take care of. Today I finished editing the last chapters and added one more (53).
I think the chapters got mixed up very confusing.
great book, loved it from start to finish!!
Too melodramatic with a weak FL who is such a push over !
A good read.
Great book and solid storyline. Disappointing to see that it hasn’t been updated in a while. Looks like at least a month already.
Loving this book!
A story of great loss, pain, anger, denial, and love. I can't wait to read the whole book. It's gonna be a roller coaster ride. Good job!
I’m so excited. I had so much fun writing chapters 75 and 76. I’m so proud of the story I’m creating. After the group meets the witch on the Mystic Mountain, secrets will be revealed, some drama will go down and then we will be diving into The Alpha Trials. And then the story will be completed.
Terrible grammar. It’s hard to follow with all of the grammatical errors.
