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This novel,while with a rather generic story, is well executed. The grammar needs some work, there's also issues with how the sentences flow.
Characters are defined and have their distinct personality, but sometimes they feel a bit 2-dimensional. Maybe it will be developped in later chapters?
To conclude, this novel has promises if the author adresses the points raised in this review.
i do really like this story. yeah it start's
with a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
a new, good and unique way of beast taming I am greatly looking forward for more hope it continues 123455678999887643322334556679886542345789
it's an interesting book
The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.
the work is extremely interesting. I loved to see it develop and bloom into beautiful writing! The characters are amazing! Keep up the good work, author!
Wow, with just only 4 chapters and your novel has already hooked me. Lemme give some stars. Keep up with the works bro. With high regards and respect.
it's so frustrating to read, I must leave a comment. This story takes slow burn to a new level... even I, who's an obsessive reader who must read every shitty story to the end, lost the interest by the fifth chapter.
Good writing skill totally wasted on the slow story.
Author is being a Troll with its rating, Undeserved
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I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is ?(I won’t say more because then it’ll be a spoiler?).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!❤️