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Hoho, 10th review. Excellent.
I have read upto chapter 265. I can honestly say i got tired of keeping track of his cultivation issues. MC has 4 bloodlines, three kinds of power system, uses multiple type of weapons (which also needs individual cultivation for each).
That in itself is already a handful but, you are still trying to make him do other kinds of cultivation. while still keeping his power realms the same even though he can fight people with levels way above him.
To top it all off you introduced the MC as someone very smart like being able to figure out peoples motives, playing with people or finding out clues to lost and forgotten realms/ruins from folklore. BUT he keeps making mistakes that are common sense. his accumulated age is more than a thousand years
Sir author, I can tell you have thought alot about this novel given how detailed it is and how you try to explain everything. But its getting too toxic.
Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.
Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother.
He is looking like trap...
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Let's talk about mc's personality. If you guys can bear it read it.
MC is like a child. When he doesn’t have a candy, he will stay silent and pretend that he doesn’t like candy at all.
When he gets a candy he will show it around to everyone. look i have a candy but it doesn’t matter to me.
He show's that he's low key and modest. People around him praises him such. But how can you be low key when everyone and there grandma knows who you are.
If you can bear this or you’ve nothing to read, you can give it a try.
After reading until chapter 31, the story so far is good. It has a unique flavor and a unique interaction between the characters.
MC of this novel is mature and thinking according to the information he had at that moment, which makes me doubt his identity when he was on Earth. I'm hoping to know more about his past. At the same time, he can be funny by using his knowledge of the novels he had read before to insert into the situation he was in. At this point alone, I would give it 10/10.
The other side characters are all great. They have their own personalities, more realistic compared to other novels that I had read before. I can't get enough of Yun Qianxue's overprotectiveness and Yun Huanxin's Gilgamesh-esque ability. Not to mention the mysterious assassin-like Yun Meilan, she is by far, attracting me the most because I like the assassin-type character.
The world-building is rich. It looks simple but it filled with mysterious and the author did a great job by revealing it bit by bit. The narration in this novel is great. Sometimes, it makes me thought I am reading a translated novel instead of an original novel.
There is surely a grammar quirk but is not that annoying. I am not a native English speaker and I find the grammar in this novel is good without disturbing my reading experience.
Lastly, I wish the author could release more per day because I can't get enough of it.
I was expecting MC to become a Celestial King and shenanigans to follow but it's just a powering up fic. What's the point of 1 million years of cultivation if it gets artificially locked? The idle game mechanic isn't even interesting since he got all the rewards (but can't use them all immediately for "some reason").
Overall, off to a bad start.
This novel is on MTL with the name of "I Just Want To Be Quiet" ....
RAW - 我只想安静的做个苟道中人
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