gotta be honest the gramma is Bad, Story needs editing and pls too much Young master this Young master that too . it Had Potential but after the first 8 Chaps it got pretty fast boring
I’m a big fan of anything related to fantasy, and I’m thinking of writing one myself.The novel is still at it’s peak, but is really good. I commend the author for making the chapters long, and the way the story started would surely tempt the readers to keeping reading further.Looking forward to reading more of it during my free time.
I'm still waiting for additional chapters of this nice book, which has a fascinating and original plot. Keep up the excellent work! will advocate for readers
Feels more like a slice of life of an unfortunate MC, you'll like the novel if you like the MC being second to a girl who shines more and is superior but still requires the existence of the MC, needs a few more chapters to flesh out the MC and if he really matters other than being a descendent of a strong family line
I just can't get over it. I love it too much I wish I can have all the chapters at once and read it through out the night. This is my kinda novel, I wouldnt mind sacrifising my sleep for it
A cat is a free animal, may the cat yowl at night to demonstrate his power and assert its dominance, cats will rule the world one day we shall become their poo slaves may the Dao be with thee and not live to that era. EXP
This was a good story until his ''father and mother'' come and help with the rebirth lily. Absolute trash. Like they leave him for idk how long and suddenly oh were your parents we abandoned you when you were 7 and now that you are half spet immortal we have come again. The audacity of those fucks.
TLDR:if you want to read this **** do it.
Have to be honest one of the best book I have been reading absolutely a gold mine....love how the charactor are be introduced and love back story of everyone in it so far..... I hope it won't be dropped....
Interesting story. Takes a trust of reborn as monster/ transmigration to another world to a new level and makes it unique. Looking forward to this stories future. So far so good.
Cant wait...nice stories.......beautifull little girl
A very fun and enjoyable read. It's a very unique take on reincarnation that I havent seen before. I wont say much to avoid spoilers, but I can guarentee u that u will love the story. The grammer is fine, character development is great and I have to yet find a boring chapter.
This is the first review I have written so just ignore it if it's awkward.The starting chapter are a bit slow paced but important as they set up the world and the characters in it,the story is smooth and planned.The story is still developing but has potential to be in the top 5.recommend it as it is different from the regular vr novels.