I love this so far can’t wait for more
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Writing Quality (1)
Why? It wasn't even translated, you claim that "you" translate it but you've just copied and cut it on MTL.. at least try to "change" some "unique" chinese slang on the novel..
You're just blatantly claiming you translate it... Have some shame will ya'?
Story development (2) Can be change if the "translator" is good..
Didn't manage to pass chapter 4, I would rather read some comments than read this badly "translated" novel..
fusion ability appeared at the 40th chapter so this shows how 40 chapter trial reads aren't enough and it should be back to 60 chapter or more if that is needed to love and understand the plot of a novel so read before saying it's clickbait it's called story development
So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea.
Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):
(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.
(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.
(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.
(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.
(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.
(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
Most of what I can say has been said by others already.
Author and Qidian both have their problems.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
i loved the wording of the story. i loved the mix of suspense and romance. i had to wait til the end of the book to give a good review. this is a book to just kick jack anf have fun with.
I know many good chines novels. But this... Low lvl intellect novel. Copy paste chat, very hard names of characters and very bad world design, no game logic with mathematics.. And more more strange things.. Drop. Sorry about my bad English)
I've read up to 405 and I am positively surprised. The story is well written, makes sense most of the time (within the built up world background). The characters feel alive and interesting. Up until now I have not found any "useless" characters.
The readers also don't get all thought processes of the MC "upfront" so there are surprises from time to time (which I personally like).
Fazit: Give it a try and keep with the story at least after the "lost dungeon arc" before judging.
Overall, the book has a decent start [review as of chapter 70]. Below I have my take on good and bad. Author, thank you for taking the time to create!Good:1) Fights are well described and easy to visualize2) Author does a good job of showing when MC is being smart and when he just thinks he is being smart3) Best friend character is not "Fatty*" [seriously this is worth a whole star]4) So far, his motivations are not due to any annoying tropes like sick family, unreasonable desire for revenge, kidnapping, etc., which I find to be an amazing deviation for usualBad:1) His parents really, really suck. Now you might say that since they are shown that they care about the MC they are good parents, but they did absolutely nothing to train him. In a world where power is everything, going to a good school requires being a good fighter, they refused to train him. If that is not neglect, I do not know what is. They are actively risking his life for no reason. MAYBE, the 4 star general dad had an excuse that he could not personally do it since he was busy, but they are rich enough and have powerful friends, I am sure they could find someone to help. During a training arc, someone has to explain basic, crucial terms to him. He was not even told what things mean, I mean how awful can you be that you cannot even provide your son a glossary.2) To me, it is/was a mystery how strong each of the commandments are. Let alone what happens when you switch. So far, we know you can get new abilities, increase talent etc., but that was not explained at once, it took like 40 chapters for definitions of power to make any sense. There are characters described as being 2nd commandment fighters. Okay, so, is that strong, middle level, apex power? That is not at all clear during my read through until later chapters. 3) This might be just me, so not as strong as #1, but the MC gets mad at every little thing. "If I wasnt hiding my powers I could beat you!!!!!!!!1111!!!!" Truth is, he cant. The MC is too big for his breaches which is fine in a weak to strong type MC, but he keeps getting beat down and never learns his lesson, makes it seem like he is throwing a temper tantrum that someone who is 2 whole levels higher than him, is in fact stronger.4) The author keeps referencing some "big event" in the past. I get it can be part of the story later and helps to define personalities and interactions of your main cast and chapter 70 in a webnovel can be just the beginning. But it comes up too often for all these vague terms in conversations to make sense. When your aunt and mom privately talk about sometime important, they would not likely talk about "the incident