Eh? Why is everyone giving this novel and author bad reviews? Indeed this may not suit some readers and maybe the quality is bad but I can gradually see it improving itself.
I like the confidence and braveness the author has to continue writing despite the reviews with 1-2 stars may discourage him.
Its pretty rough at the beginning but slowly goes with the flow as you continue further so do give it some patience. Give this author a chance to prove the novel's worth!
horrible book. the mc is a hypocrite, dumbass, lecher, pervert, no-brain. i swear i congratulate the author for making a MC that i genuinely hate.
I've read the raws while chapters upto 100 might be interesting in this novel after that it becomes too repeatative for eg : Mc super handsome > girl watch mc and fall in love> some heaven chosen kid see his girl falling for someone > he challenge mc > mc bust his balls > mc apathetic to girl same thing keeps on going its interesting at first but then its too repeatative
Plot is pretty good, I really like it. I hope that it can expand from the target being Olivia to other women. ALSO PLEASE UPDATE MORE REGULARLY DONT GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK
This novel has to be redo im sorry it has been given very bad review such as a lot of grammatical reviews so i have to redo it sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good, I'd like to see where this goes. As of writing this the story is on chapter 10 and it's going pretty well so far!
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Will change the review depending on what I think affer I have read it.
However, the description confuses me. It says that his fam is basically desicrating his body and even wants to turn him into a puppet. He wakes up exteamky angry, like yes ofc he would be.
But then later on it mentions he helps his family instead? Like what? Didnt you wake up because they where desicrating him? Why would he then instead help them???
Can I just ask how you are able to understand mlt novels because the English for me is too messed up for me to understand. Are you just able to understand or is there something you do to make it more legible. I would rlly appreciate if u could let me know coz there are so many raw novels I want to read but can't understand. Thanks
Better than a lot and I mean a lot of novels out there and I am talking about the free chapters I don’t know about the rest can’t read it
Alright guys, as a shameless author I will support my work and rate it 5 star... without wasting any time let me just give the pros and cons according to what I feel.
Pros:
1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.
2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.
3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.
4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength.
cons:
1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.
2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting read
Alright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...