Great story and all. But the age of the MC makes people hate him. How can a toddler be so lustful and the women who try seduce a little child like that is disgusting not entertaining. If you changed the age of the MC to around 12 then it would be more understandable not a little toddler under 2ft bossing around old men
This story is great. The plot is fantastic, and the characters are very funny. In the half a year since I started using this app, this is one of the best stories I have read. Although, after each chapter gets out, I feel like I want more ten of them after reading it, I am okay with the speed of releases as long as it isn’t dropped before reaching its end.
horrible translator, it's better to just find the raw and read MTL
I would have preferred to see him actually get stronger to the point where he could have taken over the monsters himself. It's still a good read and really makes you want to see the MC get stronger
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.
Honest review!!
Such a good plot.
The synopsis is catchy.
The writing style and the flow are so pleasing.
The characters are so interesting.
nice piece author. books like this are very rare here. more please
Really good rewriting op mc good story good writing smart mc fast pace and not boring continue just need more chapter to attract more people
good story
I liked some of that mystery that appears in each chapter
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I'll startwith the single flaw of this masterpiece: the arrangement of grammar isn't very fluent right now, which caused me to have difficulties, though I believe some editing can remedy that. Aside from that, the narrative features a fantastic take on the demon cliche and a fast-paced plot. I love the fights, although I want to see how the demon lord is related to the elf.And like a previous comment, I would agree that Thorkell is a fitting name for the demon lord's host, and much thought was put into the world's background. I can't wait to see where you take this; overall, I shall give it 5 stars because I see a lot of potential.Overall, the novel is incredibly enjoyable, and I can't wait to read more as each chapter drops one by one. The best two days of my life in a while, that much I will say.
When will the next chapter be realist ??
It is good and enjoyableI just don’ get why the author doesn’t make the mc buy basic passive skills that will help like enhanced senses of night vision or basic stuff like that that will be useful in a dungeon