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Seems pretty good so far. hopefully it continues after the writing contest is over but i can understand if its dropped considering your still working on your other book As wellPs: make sure to take plenty of breaks in between writing. i would hate to see you burn out or start to fell stressed like some other authors have. Thanks for the novel author?
That very first line in the synopsis had really grabbed me! Overall, great start, hope to read more chapters! Keep it up!
I can say, without a doubt, that the main female character of this novel (Lin Sanjiu) is definitely one of my favourites out of all of the female MCs out there. As a woman myself, I always like a good story with a strong female character, and this novel lives up to my expectations—Lin Sanjiu manages to be absolutely badass without being excessively cruel and heartless like some other female MCs from Chinese novels. The characters and plot are also well thought out, and each character has their own agenda and personality.
I've only read only the free chapters which are about chapter 51 at the time that I'm writing this review. If you like smooth writing, mmorpg, fighting, grinding, type of novel then this is for you.
Writing Quality: You can pretty much read this novel smoothly and there's little to none info dump so that's 5/5.
Stability of Updates: Although I've only read the free chapters, I always get notified for updates so it's pretty stable 5/5,
World Background: It has unique classes or "path" as they call it here and it seems like every person have their own unique classes. So far this seems like a western fantasy with goblins, dungeons, elves, dragons, and etc. In these 50 chapters, they haven't talked about kingdoms, who's against who, famous adventurers, or anything but it has hinted about factions. But I still give a 5/5 cause it's kinda interesting for me.
Story Development: The story is going well for the first 40 chapters but to me, it felt like the plot was forced when they went in a dungeon so 4/5.
Character Design: Characters have unique classes, especially MC. MC's class is pretty fun and gives a lot of freedom to let the one who owns the class be creative. However, when they were about to go to a dungeon, it felt like the MC who was being developed in the first 40 chapters went into ruin at least to me. In the first 40 chapters, the MC was portrayed as an eloquent, smart, reckless but on another side of the coin can be seen as courage type of guy. But when they went into the dungeon, it felt like he gave up easily.
Overall: I would recommend this novel for people who likes mmorpg stuff.
Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even
Great novel. Hidden gem. Such a relaxing, wholesome story. Definitely recommended.
I really enjoyed this novel. Writing quality, story, characters I liked them all. I hope the author would like to write at least a couple of thousand chapters. Because I feel like everything is just getting started.
The story is great! It starts amazingly and has realistic and incredible points of interest. There’s a mix of comedy added that is fun to read, though it gets to a bit much. The story is great up until about chapter 215. After that, and even at that point, the realistic, action-packed and gritty story turns into a complete unrealistic comedy designed to mock the previous chapters. There are complete 180’s for nearly every character and thr progression of the story stagnates early on until it completely stops. SLIGHT SPOILER- - - -
Josh Malum at around 215 ish and afterwards is a total comedy character thay does whatever he wants, mocks everyone, has this insane brovado that lets him overcome anything no matter what, mocks the military and uses them for stupid fun and the very-serious-very-strong members if society bow down to him only because of their sudden interest in a made-up guild no one has heard of except from the rookie competition. This “made up” guild apparently garnered SO MUCH attention from its mention in the rookie competition championship that the military and B/A/S rated guilds bow to him and his every whim. Then it gets to the alter tower and ifs ridiculous weird challenges that are so dumb and random it ruins the story almost immediately. Honestly, I’m pretty sure the author was changed around chapter 140 or so.
Great start of a book, and I loved it. The comedy and how far it went ruined it for me. It was all so random and forced it was hard to read.
Alright here we go.
The author gives a good impressionable first chapter with the introduction of the fight scene. The action words and battle skills portrayed presents a simple yet smart visual of an action scene. The names used are interesting and unique, I quite like them a lot. the story itself flows naturally without rush or lag which makes it enjoyable. Definitely a read you should pick up.Wishing the author the very best!
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Honestly I have been wanting a novel from a young master POV for a long time and this is the first one I’ve found. It done so well too, I dont think ive ever laughed so hard during a novel.
If you’ve ever been curious about what it takes to be a young master then look no further! This novel contains a comprehensive guide on how to be a steroptype. Thats right! Not all steroptypes come naturally like it does white people, some require dedication and training. For real, great theme and an absolute laugh.
I will speed this up, dry humour, funny internal monologue, POV alternates between characters (its funny too), sterotypes/action scene are great!, female leads + romance is growing, young master is not dense to romance and not dumb.
Cant wait to read more!
one of the best, great job author.
keep it up, need more chapter a.s.a.p