An updated comment now that, I am further into the story. Okay It's pretty good? I honestly don't really know what else to say. We get to see more about the world. It is a slow burn but seems to be speeding up.
The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!
this is quite good i got a few laughs , i would advise putting more detail into your discription of the people and the place like what kind of eyes the person had the surounding what the person is wearing the weather the streets the kind of aura the person carries the expression but not to much talk
And with all that your book will become top notch
I just started to write since My town passed a act where we cant leave town so pls enjoy if I was to write the next generation in My Hero Academia
Not that good considering the other harry potter fanfictions. There is little to no character development and also does not stress much on the main character just keeps going on and on about the events. It seriously is not good, you can read it but don't blame me for not warning you
Not very well written, the novel is very simplistic that it's pretty terrible. There's only two sides in this story from what I have read so far(20+) there's the main character side and the antagonist side. The antagonists side is very boring and underdeveloped where they hate the main character because the antagonists are small minded. I do not recommend reading this if you want actually depth to your story or a good plot.
I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,
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This could have been a great story but the author made it garbage.His father almost killed him and his mother, he instead of calling police like a sane person ran away like a bitcch and started telling ppl about future and started placing bets.He knew his father could kill his mother at any time but that **** ran away
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When are the new chapters due released? Translators said they would start releasing by the end of November 2020 but we are almost in February 2021 they still did not release any more chapters.There literally are not any new chapters for about 6-7 months now. All we want from translators is just an announcement, whether you will continue translating this or not?