It's pretty well written. But there are some things im not comfortable with. The inner monologue, for example, is written in pretense tense and can sometimes be distracting since there are no italics. Other than that it's pretty well written.
I am giving 5 stars rating for all because the author put an effort to work on this novel. The story is interesting, exactly what I am looking forward to read! :-))
it is good book and does not follow the a repeating pattern i hope this book continues and increases the frequency of its chapter release
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Step 1 of being a lazy writer: Read a few cultivation novels.Step 2: Write a cultivation novel copying what you read but change the names of characters and techniques. Change the order that events happen.Step 3: Profit!Cultivation novels are the most unoriginal genre out there. Read 2 or 3 and you have read them all. I actually started falling asleep reading this.
Good concept, bad chapters. Only the title and novel cover hooked me in....................................................................................
to think people get payed for doing such a bad job...They should have just let it be, and let others do it instead of half assing this novel.
Please Make mc see again, and make mc strong and domineering not a coward author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And give him a bit of ruthless and coldness
Great! The way it was written is just great. It's like riding a bus of questions. Be they words or characters. Be they events or the readers. All will search for answer. This book is quite similar to Moriarty the Patriot, I like it. Great job madame. Do keep on writing and updating~
it was far better than the ones I have read recently, so it deserves the rating. And update more chapter faster please, can't wait to read.
The author creating something totally unique, the start was captivating, it caught my interest write away and here I am recommending anyone who sees this to read this novel.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR!