Interesting start for the plot. Chapters need editing.
The world building in here is quite mixed-up. There are blood-clans who are definitely not vampires, but something like a creature who uses their bloodline like mana/magic. And it’s not completely an inanimate thing (that bloodline), because it thinks albeit like a child and has free will to do as it wishes. You can treat it like a black cat familiar to a witch. In her original world from where the heroin comes from - she already has a background of mixing up with fringe elements like mages, witches and the like. She hasn't seen them, but have spent hours and hours reading about them in her father's library. And they are not just stories for her (although the heroin's father seems to treat them as fairytales) they are definitely not just fairy-tales; they are records of creatures living in her previous universe of who’s authenticity the majority, the people of her realm have no idea about. It’s a pity that Wei Zhiruo, the heroin, never gets a chance to meet any such creatures before she travels to another world (in the beginning of the story). But this experience, is not futile. It helps her to form an idea about her own belongingness, her own idea about self/identity and see and recognize new events that are fantastic - and yes, which aides her as the opportunity to cultivate as an immortal comes to her. She is not someone, who has read xianxia stories like a normal modern person traversing to another world - no! She actually doesn't have the littlest idea of which kind of world she had landed into, it is for her to discover and enjoy. But this ignorance surely gives her a chance to interpret this new world with all the fantastical knowledge about universe and space she already knows and find a bridge in the new land, which is completely unfamiliar to her and turn it into her second home.
I the premise feels fresh. The action at the start was promising and like the direction of subsequent chapters. The main character is definitely not 1 dimensional and I can't wait to see what his lost memories are that changed him so drastically.
Dear author when is the next update My heart can't handle the stress?????????????.It's too good How many chapters to endingI really can't wait anymore but it's damn toooooooo good
Awesome story, Love it a lot❤️❤️ I can’t wait to see how the story will progress and I do appreciate how the author isn’t dragging the story for unnecessary fillers. Every chapters continues on about the plot and keeps the readers reading for more chapters and development of the story. Great job author‼️❤️?
I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
Not to be that guy, but what happened to "my first time is reserved for Sophie".
One of the board members were attending a private party held in a dungeon and she was overexcited to crash the event.
Slowly but surely, the other half is disintegrating into pieces due to a cataclysmic depressurization of the inner earth that is exposed to the vacuum of space.
"Sorry for the dress, i created the first thing that came into my mind." Said the pink-haired man, an expression of pure boredom on his face. Mavis couldn't help but wince at that, she never wanted to see that expression on his face when he was looking at her.
Only shooting stars break the mold
"Just let him Seokjin. It's his birthday after all. He can hug whoever he want. Don't be just a grandpa"