It started good, but as it goes on the story just plainly went downhill after him having money with his cheat the inconsistency of the mc and also his sister's character is very noticeable. It was introduced that the MC has strong will and drive due to him and her sister growing up as orphans as well as her sister being a considerate person. It just went downhill that after the MC got ample money he just became a beta MC being subjected to the whims of her sister which also became spoiled. Nevertheless it was such a good story but the character development is just.... well whatever good luck
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Im screaming‼️
I love this so much! Im a reader of all genres and this is my first time reading a story like this and I seriously can not express how much i have fallen in love with this just from reading 4 chapters!
Im overly excited right im so sorry
I mean i Its good and its readable but theres so many mistakes in the writing that im Really confused sometimes but overall Its a really decent story
For what it is, this is a funny as well as well thought out story. The main character has development and evolves as he goes through the trials of surviving his escape from the dungeon and learning how to free himself from his contract as an undead. This was a great idea to take the dungeon and bring it out from the Undeads point of view.
It is a fantastic story... you can enjoy it and it’s exciting to read it. I am waiting for the new chapter. I like how the autor writes thIs story with all those details.
A page turner and most certainly a keeper. I can't imagine what you guys are anticipating but be sure to get your minds blown. I love how you are all closely following the story , brace yourself for we are going for a ride of a lifetime.
See you between the lines. Don't forget to rate, review and definitely vote
I like this novel, I have read it so far and I can say I'm impressed with how the author trying to picture the book. It was probably hard to write on but this author is great! Good job author, please update them more.
Appreciate this work! Filled with so many mysteries! I wish you all the luck and hope for more chapters in the future! Please be inspired and keep entertaining us!
Author I have a question if you can answer it I will be happy! Is there a romance in this novel? TKeep it up and thank you nevertheless. ♥♥♥
The story is much more amazing than the synopsis made it out to be. There are sentences in the first chapter that had me laughing out loud. Good job, author!