This novel is absolutely fantastic with a total of 3k chapters. So far I have read till 1.8k chapters and am still hooked. Its not just about martial arts but how the martial arts system is constantly refined to become better. Only issue is the machine translation which makes it difficult to read.
Is there a way where random people can edit the chapters that are translated with machine?
I created this account in order to say that this novel should really get what it deserves. Which is a slightly better translation and a lot faster release rate. If you can't fix the release rate please give it someone that has the capability to so or of course just get someone to help you. With regards :)
I just want to lower the rating a bit. I cringed a lot of times and I didn't even cross 20 chapters. I tried to bear with it but the cringing started to hurt so I can't read any further. I picked it for it's high rating, which is definitely exaggerated.
anyone knows it's raw? I kinda liked this one
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Really great book and one of my all time favorite.writing is really good and i rarely saw any Grammar mistakes, characters are well developed and the world is detailed. I must say it's really sad to see storys like this getting dropped and I still hope one day i will wake up and my phone gives me the notification "How to be a succubus released chapter 102".
Game elements with exciting twists..... But the update is really slow. Please release chapters more frequently......Hope this novel won't be dropped unlike others...............
The story has its faults, but there is a noticeable growth for the author, so I expect this to change into a good story at some point. Author does sadly need an editor to help him or her out with the whole process, as there are mistakes and repetitiveness in the chapters.
welp the review i gave is just. till chap 11 after the boy wakes up and **** he has the ability to learn anything and do the impossible possible and some other **** yet i cant seem to find marc at all it like there is only 1 soul in the body and not 2 even tho marc got into teh body it like the boy killed him or smth the subject of marc isnt even touched upon but it should be if marc himself is in the damn synopsis. anyways what my problem is that this has a pretty **** grammar quality but it readable. it has ****ty character design for the kid acts like an ***** even tho he was inside his own body for 5 years or smth but he doesnt seem affected at all and it not normal he doesnt seem to have any psychological side effects even after he was inside his body still functioning but couldn't talk, if i put the best cookie u ever ate in front of you and then starve you for years how would you think ? anyways basic psychology is a NEIN. World background ?.... well we know he is pampered by gey mothers and has a grandma who loves him even tho she never say him. and he loves them even tho he never saw them, as his moms his grandparents are rich too. yeh imo the only thing till chap 11 is just that he is rich and cant even seem to find the slightest bit of fear that he might have a hard life. if he has not hardships he can never learn truly nor experience ****.
story development.... ohh wait that exists here ? i thought the whole story was about the kid being a superhuman who can do anything if he desires nothing interesting here 0-0. updates are very good. all in all if the guy would learn from his mistakes and create a new novel he would best start small and then make it big and he shouldnt be focused on filler till at least he has 30 to 40 chaps cuz u gotta make the main story a priority not how much the mc is so badass and he has the IQ of 1000.
Buildungs roman. if u ever heard of that term learn it. anyways hope next time the author will make a better first impressions cuz this was truly a disappointment.
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MC is a brain dead retard with a hero complex made out to be smart and clever because 10% of the time he makes a decent choice or "remembered something I researched for a story".
The other 90% is spent with him freaking out over tiny problems and in general just being an idiot that feels the need to protect and save everyone, most of the time failing and literally fainting at the last stretch before being saved by whatever plot armor pops out of some little loli ass.
Would not recommend at all.
Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didn’t make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would not have all of these problems.
Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.