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Locked by Chapter 10.. No chance to see any quality development or story potential. Short chapters and rushed power explanations. Potential is high but can't be realized.
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
Pretty much garbage. It's poorly translated. If that was all there was to it I may be able to give it somewhat of a pass, but unfortunately the content is just as poor as the translation.
I really like the story so far i think it has a really good background good plot and has alot of potential to become a really good story i just need more chapters man lol
Hi, Just writing a Review to Encourage The Author to Make EVEN More Incredible Chapters, and Increasing the Rating and Number of Reviews I Guess.
Very nice story
Exciting
Excellent
I love every chapter
Very much indeed fascinating
You will glued reading every chapter
Cant wait to read all chapters
The problem with this story is how much it repeats itself. You have the story told from the protagonists perspective for 2 chapters then the next 2 chapters are the exact same story told again but with other characters reaction added.
This gets tedious pretty fast and results in a glacial plot pace.
Hello, shameless author here.
My third novel on Webnovel. I had a hard time finding new ideas for my new story. I've read various novels, but they don't help much. Even if an idea came up, it didn't feel right to me.
This went on for days and frustrated me. And finally, I decided to open my game directory, which I hadn't touched in a long time because I was busy writing. You know, to refresh my mind.
And I started playing Rimworld again, one of my favorite games. It was a simulation of managing a colony to survive various hardships.
So, I thought, why not just write with inspiration from that game? After all, no one have written about the theme.
Enjoy!
This is actually enjoyable i hope that it will still be translated. Although there are some weird lines and the mc's personality is bland sometimes act like a stupid kid. The world related to WOW is really enjoyable. The mechanics and the exploration plus the way the story revolves like a bunch of RPG side quest is really good. Hope to read more of this.