A strong affiliation towards the light, but pushed into darkness by jealous conspirators. A story that doesn't shy to delve into the ugliness of human societies, told through a visceral depiction of both the good, bad and the ugly. If you've enjoyed DA's other novels, then don't think further and jump into this. You're in for a grand ride.
Impressive. To put such a new and interesting take on this saturized genre, is surely a feat worth mentioning. Might just be the difference between a hobby and a professional writer? Even then this quality of writing is not normally seen that often on this plattform. I cannot wait to see, where the story takes the protagonist. Great work! Keep it up
A MMC(male main character) in for a quick transmigration? It's a first for me! Hopefully no harem, I don't want to remember so many names... but even if he has a harem, I doubt it'd be a harem that he'll accept. Jiang Li, ganbatte! Author, ganbatte!!!!!!
Love this WN. Been following for some time now and came here to give some early support on this platform. The author is always consistent and friendly. While it can feel a bit rushed at times that's just the way the MC is! all in all, this is a fun and quirky little WN to follow. :)
I just know that this book has a real west African settings and all the areas are truely places in Africa the book is something different believe me
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
Webnovel is soo cheap now, even trial read are now 40 chapters with 20 fuccking locked chapters. even then good novels are abandoned, picked novels included. what a sad life, they're not only licked the plate clean, table and floor too they lick. pathetic
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Some of my biggest issues with this story are the weird slang the voice chick uses, the pacing and the MC. Slam donkeys? Pay pigging? Those terms make me cringe! The story picks up pace after the fourth chapter and before that, things are really slow. The funniest part so far was the thong scene in chapter five and that's it. The author constantly brings up the MC's hair and weight and constantly makes fun of him for it. Those jokes get old fast. Ben reminds me of Michael Scott but younger and self-aware of the fact that people don't like him. I like comedic stories where bad things happen to an unlikable protagonist (i.e. Dwight Schrute in The Office) but this story didn't make me laugh much
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I think there's nothing more to say, this is probably the best novel out of this batch of trial novels.This is the type of novels people are looking for.If I had to list the disadvantages, then it is the author's focus on sex. He's like a virgin teenager.Players go around having sex with NPCs as soon as possible.All NPC girls give away their body to any noble/mage NPC/player.Raped girls, murder girl cases...MC gropes a girl with mental power by mistake...MC stays in an Inn that is a brothel...MC gets info from a tavern that has girls serving customers with their bodies...the Chief of Magic Association has young pretty girls serving him in Tower.Every f girl is blushing and ready to have sex.ALL THIS IN 60 SHORT CHAPTERSThe spoiler is the reason why I can't give this story 5* even though the MC is a honest and decent guy. All the author thinks of is s*x and every next situation must be somehow involved with it!!!