I’m gonna write a proper review compared to others and it would include my opinion and suggestion.The story itself is very good the mc isn’t too reliant on the system and is very independent something you don’t see nowadays. The story is very well paced and the author’s ball knowledge is extremely good.The whole story is just very well crafted and you can see how the authors writing improved over time.I hope romance gets added to the story later on and I do believe your work would be even better for numerous reasons and you would be able to attract more readers.This is truly one of a kind football novel that I haven’t seen before and i hope it turns out well and I will heavily suggest for everyone to read this.
As a novel written for me i whole heartedly (shamelessly) give this a five star for all that you've done. Well jokes apart this novel really have a great potential and after reading it I'm legit curious on what's goin to happen next, is this the ******* Evie desired or destiny's play for something yet to be yearned for. Whatever it is I'm sure it's going to be a journey filled with action-packed, soul stirring excitement. Thanks for this wonderful gift evil
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Good story, I like that. Please don't drop it
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one of the best novels on webnovel one of the best novels on webnovel the only one in the world of the world of the night
Honestly the author gave up on this book and gave it a very abrupt ending witch was total garbage. If you want to read this be prepared for a very rushed and trash ending
Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
epic novel. I now need to hit the character limit so I am going to put some very unspecified and uninspired text within this review alright
Shamless review because I am a Shamless passersby
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somnia aeternae vocare possit aeternam tenebrarum obscurum.
ut omnes moriuntur magnificentiam aeternae adorare.
I do not recommend this novel. The first 4 chapters he writes exam papers while every teacher gives some random immature comments, the next 15 chapters those papers circulate on the internet and everyone gives random comments again. Yes that's right, this happens for 15 chapters. This is the worst pacing i have ever seen
The MCs cheat is a system, one of its perks at the lowest level is .05 Chinese renminbi per breath taken. Converting the cheat into real numbers that, unless the author is a f’cking idiot, should be accurate.
.05Y/$ per breath taken. 17,000-30,000 breaths per day, resting or light walking. Moderate exercise for an hour, 50,000, multiple hours, 50-78,000. 17K=850Y/$, 30K=1,500Y/$. 50K=2,500Y/$. 78K=3,900Y/$. A relatively cheap restaurant experience, ie a chipotle burrito or a hamburger from chili’s, would be 20Y-40Y in China, while it’d be roughly 15-20$ in America. Even the lowest amount is 850Y/Day. 3 meals means it’s 790 a day. Basic utilities for a 1000sqft apartment, 400-500Y, Internet is another 100Y. 600Y. That means in one day he has paid a months utilities and food plus 190Y extra. Even in the city center the nice apartments are only 4,000Y, so in 4-5Days, eating out every meal, he has his months rent. 6 days max he has the apartment, Internet, utilities covered perfectly, make it 7 days for mobile phone and the months transportation expenses. With the rest of the money he can buy branded Nike shoes or leather business shoes, every day. New jeans and a T-shirt every day if he doesn’t get shoes. New sports jacket every day without shoes or other clothes. New kitchen appliances etc etc. this is with the LOWEST breath level. The absolute lowest. You are basically set for life to never work again, near unlimited new clothing, unlimited purchasing of anything really, all the games, all the mobile purchases, anything. Heck, just throw this money into stocks at random and you’ll eventually have so much money the rest of the system just does matter.
Let’s put it like this, easily get 1,500Y per day, that’s 187 per hour. In America, let’s go that the buying power is half. So imagine making at minimum 93.75$ an hour, in an hour day. That’s 45,000$ a month. 540,000$ per year. You could literally buy ANYTHING you want.
This novel has this saying "getting rich without doing anything ". I think that this is not so bad and I hope when I read it it will be so, so author good luck