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Don't bother reading this, it's the same cultivation novels template with boring cultivation system and world building, the main character is just plain stupid, the grammar is so bad that you lose brain cells every paragraph, the system is just terrible and annoying, what a great idea to make the one thing that will appear in almost every chapter extremely annoying, and why does it punish the main character every time he swears? Did the author really think that's interesting?I can go on and on just read at your own risk of losing brain cells.
warlock of the Magus world is one of my top 3 favorite novels, since this seems to be a work from the same authorIm super hyped about this! (Typing extra because 140 that’s why)
another trash fake op mc. depaiee authors that put fake tags on novels to bait people. got to 117 but it becomes obvious hes bot op, hes struggling too much and I'm not here for that. was kinda interesting but it got ruined, there's potential for a nice wife in the future that he teases but considering the fake op tag this will probably also not be romance it will be a harem
underwhelming. Plus greedy by dividing one chapter into multiple short parts. waste of coins and passes.I realise why so many people have started dropping this novel. deterioration of writing quality after chapter 80.
Not worth reading with no editor and the mc name able to change in the 20 chapters and other stuff.
This is a great novel if you want an mc who is cold and strong but not op most people make it where he is cold and op or he is cold and it is weak to strong but na he’s like on the border of op
Read up to ch47: The MC is Naive with Hero Complex who fights unprepared and without foresight. The enemies and bandits are dumb as they don't kill and clean up potential revenge plots. Students from other academies are naive and ignorant unbecoming of a world where strength rules. Maybe their trainers don't teach them how the world works (Spoiler: Imagine sending your prized students to their death by not teaching them common sense. ) We are brought to a world where the strong rules yet dissemination of life preservation knowledge is lacking in refinement
Author, elena (mc wife ) should have senced his soul , as you said that their soul us connected, we should expect that he got taken after he achieved his goal in lower realm or they should send noir (death guard or mc future wife ) to keep him safe in case of danger etc. what I want to say is most logical decision is he return to clan in very short period time unless there is going to be war as to protect him, keeping him hidden in the lower realm or safe zone in the immortal realm where no one know his alive etc . Finnaly, personally I would have liked that he will return within 50 chapters. or is going Typical and most annoying is climb the realm one by one (which is waste of time and repeated scenes). Still for those read this , didn't read the novel i would recommend you to read it, it's awesome plus thank you Author for reading this .
1st people need to stop correcting British English spellings. lol The only issue I had with this book is that it was a bit of whiplash on some plot points. I greatly enjoyed the story. I could definitely tell this was written and posted chapter by chapter versus being written as a whole and post
argh, after trying so much. I found your book. and that hard work paid me well..thanks author for entertaining us with your books.
please update
I am seriously growing on this book
