Really good overall keep up the good work
Quite an interesting read, I have to say, the only problem I had with this was the author's proficency in the English language(not saying that I am better by any means, it just felt awkward). Overlooking that, the premise is quite cool(might be biased because I just like ghosts in general). There's only 10 chapters so far, so imma leave this here, so that the author updates more, before that, 5★. First time writing a review on something, so I might not have included all the important things that a review should have, oops.- Eggs are divine, ResLiF.
so far I love this book????... unique plot, good description of characters and their development... Once you start reading, you can't stop.... I'm dying of curiosity what will happen next... Autoryou are doing amazing work so far , keep going ???
My brutally honest review after reading all the published chapter Firstly the writing and story development is not bad however they are some issues with clarity as Junior a crown prince was getting stood up by a regular maid since the novel hadn't reviewed anything about the maids background I am assuming its just a regular maid who somehow had more authority than the protagonist suppossed sister and had the status to think about talking to a prince with a tone of an adult lecturing a naughty child mannerSecondly there are quite a number of cring shit which could potentially cause readers to stop following your bookThirdly the encounter between Junior and his sister especially how they made up was quite forced and heavily unrealistic saying some words like I love you at the end, from what I understand he had no place to say that even tho he wasn't actually the one who had treated her badly, it was even more absurd as the maid didn't feel something wrong as the protagonist who suddenly had a change of heart starts calling out strong words like i love you also dont get started on the latest chapter the protagonist literally said he loved someone he just met and Helen got jealous about that ? Helen didn't even seem to be in love with the protagonist before that and to add Junior was a total jerk so unless she had special preferences that was just forced in other to have her as a potential harem memberNevertheless it wasn't actually as bad as I expected and managed to keep me interested at least until the last chapter so Ill rate it a 4.0
I found this book too early... do a mass release !!!
It’s a really good novel,Was waiting for more chapters so I can binge but I saw the novels on hiatus, hope you continue with the story and not drop it- it’s really good so hope you come back author.Also I know you confirmed it’s not a harem but I hope Aria is the only fl since you said in your understanding a harem is one with 3+ fls. Olivia likes him but hope u don’t add her as a love interest(own opinion, you’re the author).
thanks for representing the African people in a new light
author why no update long time me enjoy to read please update fast
good story.....I love this novel and like to see similar ones
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i am a good reader so a good review . also read to chapter 15 in official website.