Plus Points:
Writing quality is the main plus point to this great world background. Update stability is good and character design is also up to the mark.
Drawbacks:
To me, I do read slow-paced stories and enjoy them if they intrigue me. This story is Slow-paced but the problem is that it feels like it never took off, it's still there exactly how it started after nearly 40 chapters. They is no sign of the system promised in the tags, MC is reincarnated so many times but seems so underwhelming, I mean... I get that he lost his abilities but still I did not find that aura or charm of a guy who lived 364 times. I liked the slow pace at the start but as the chapters went by, it got boring and I felt like abandoning the book. There are no interesting scenarios to read further.
I hope the author correct this.
Wow, like the prologue already took my heart away! It goes ahead in a literally claming sense and there comes the twist, I like it how the author hs paced the story❤️✨keeping writing this beautiful story
this is a very good book to read as per previous reviews I can't say much except don't ever stop writing author it is a read and very detailed I do hope I get to see the other chapters
This is a *** tale and the *** scenes are great. The rough way.
And is also an adventure book. A competent one at that. With a somewhat developed world, where most elements can be viewed as a commentary at real life issues.
All in all, it's a case of "came for smut - stayed for story".
It was good until the Girl came?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????...????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
btw theres a guy posting the same thing on the site..... just wanted to say..................................................................
whe all want to experience the VR so badly..................................................................................................
this pretty much interesting, lot of novel as this but this is worth to read at your spare time, it's refreshing, I just found first chapter quite entertaining and so far it's great!
I am chapter 75 and it's just boring without any kind of action
im sorry but you should add more heartbreaking moments
he endured the beatings and still love the girl that much [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]nahh! man ! thats too much love bro
Compared to the absolute nuclear trash we have been receiving these past weeks, this one is definitely better. I know that's not much, but at least it isn't a sign in, pet, survival, hint, or dragon series...
great story, love it so much.
writing quality is good, story development is great, character is likeable, more update please, world background is very interesting. I really hope to read more of it.
thank you author, keep it up.