The writing quality is very good considering how the author still says there’s more for improvement so that I’m happy about. I especially like how it’s worded become I’m very picky with what I read. Unless it’s something I really like I would atelast try to read but otherwise I’ll just erase it from my memory if possible.
The updates are stable, very stable but I worry that the author shouldn’t spoil us and deplete her whole stockpile just for us because I don’t want the author to stock up while on hiatus because it wouldn’t be a hiatus.
The story development is at a good pace and it’s a good read.
(Hope the rating reaches 4 from 3.9)
Es muy bueno es chido el MC y toda la novela...........................................
Sigue así bro..................................................... .... ..... . ..
I was expecting a realistic story after reading the 1st chapter but by 7th chapter i realized that this will be just another pipedream novel about world peace and a hero raised out of tragedy (quite appealing to ignorant masses). The deceased grand mother character made sure that the MC will be person who is happy to have people walk all over him with an assuring attitude that he wont take any revenge even when he becomes powerful in the future. I guess these kind of MC's appeal to the hidden masochistic side of whimps.
I like this book and its pretty good but I dont get the MC would take a worm as his beast... honestly its stupid and isnt strong and its useless!!! And y did u stop writing when the book isnt finished!??? whats the point in writing if ur not going to finish the book!!????
Decided to give it a try but after reading the first few chapters, I am hooked ! It’s well written story with lots of well explained background.
I love the character development of Alexis. She is not a weak female lead like many others. Im rooting for her to survive til the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Novel is fine, I'd recommend trying it out. Not a huge fan of the MC, just my opinion.
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I'm still reeling from the fact that I devoured an entire book in one sitting! The author's masterful storytelling and skillful plotting had me hooked from start to finish. The writing was engaging, the characters were well-developed, and the story was utterly addictive. I'm in awe of the author's talent and can't wait to read more of their work!
Hello, I am the author.
The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting.
I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that.
I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel.
I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic).
The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.
I like the story the premise is great but the first few chapters need to be reread for grammar errors and there are times where a better use of word choice is best. Character’s are suddenly introduced and there are quite a few in the first few chapters. Interacts are great and fights are descriptive. But I can’t really visualize them well enough. The world had many things I want to know and would wish they were described in more detail. Possibly describe the village, city, buildings, ground, and air.
Amazing novel!
I’m at chapter 101 and I’m loving it!
Fantastic book even if some grammar issues BUT it has been discontinued right in the middle of it. It’s really a shame because I was enjoying this book.
Just because you dare to write about ancient India. Here my five Star Review.No more words need....As suggestions can be given in chapter paragraphs too.Keep it up author ??