A very satisfying read, I really enjoyed the pace and how it was not a predictable story. The characters are well drawn, as is the environment. The esoteric elements gave me pause to think. Above all, I enjoyed this book as it left me with questions to ponder while delivering a solid read.
No thanks bro. Don't know why crap like this hogs the top spots while gold like Way of the devil, Herding gods, Nightmare's Call, Nano Machine, etc. which are 10x better are way lower.
A very typical light-novel style work, somewhat reminded me of the Japanese anime RE:CREATERS but I don't think they are the same except for the part they are all about fictional characters trying to break the fourth wall and get in touch with their creators (Didn't watch the anime myself only heard about it so I'm not really sure).
There's a maturity and a degree of completion in author's writing style, so I assume the writer either read lots of light novels like the MC or practiced writing them for some time already, and the language is simple and very easy to read--though may lack some sort of characteristic/personality in there and seem a little plain, but it doesn't dampen much of the reading experience so it's not really a big problem, the writer may work on it if he wishes to better his writing than just "light-novel style". There are lots of casual and daily usage of language like abbreviation in the text, but in this case since it's a light novel whose MC and most characters are of young generations, this I would rather call a merit instead of a disadvantage, for it adds some realness from life into the fiction, same for the details of how otaku people like MC form up together in a club, organize those RP activities and interact with each other, showing that author is clearly someone in this circle.
As for advice I don't really have much to give, because clearly the author positioned his work to be a light novel and in this sense it is already rather well-written: the writing quality is above the standard, the plots are progressing in a very proper pace, the characters are presented...well not to say very vividly but in a very comic way. Though for people who are already very into Japanese light novel/manga/anime for a long time, the story, setting and characters won't be that original, but still because it's fairly written, it should still be enjoyable to read.
The only thing I could ask--besides double check some minor typing mistakes--is to step beyond the light novel circle and add something more unique and unseen into the work. It is only an impression I got intuitively from the text so not necessarily correct, but it seems that the author is the type of people who's very much in-in in one circle (or one type of circles) of hobbies and social contacts, and that kind of feature also reflects in the text--it seems to be created solely for the light novel circle and doesn't really show any intention of doing anything else.
Of course it's not a bad thing--it is something everyone has an "expertise" would do and only people who have some sort of "expertise" are interesting, but to stay in one place for too long will make it harder to think outside of the box and create something of fundamental originality.
P.S. A boy I'm having a crush in college right now is called Max XD
I really like this story and the direction it is going but that being said it had a really rough start and you have to push through the first few chapters where the author forces the MC into a really bad situation where he has to dig himself out of it with the help of his best friend. I think this was workable and the story developed nicely but the biggest issue is the constant grammar errors and word choice that makes this book difficult to continue and the reason I dropped it once it went premium. If the author was able to get a proofreader or an editor i think i would pick the story up again! This is just one lousy opinion and I hope the author can keep working the best they can and continue to improve!
One man army is 187 on the other pirate site, your not gonna update?
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The other thing that I have to go to finch west is a great. If not a cry baby or easily angered by the fact that I have a lot of people. Are you guys are just too much of a guy, raise your head and RIP mc is a great if not a good read. This way too much and he doesn't seem to be able to get you to do the same as you do you have to be a little dick and you can make it even more painful to be a part of the galaxies and the world of gumball xxx is a great if not a good thing. The other day and it is more like an hour and a half a million times.
Outer space novels can be a bit tasking for any writer. But, you are really doing a great job with it. The ML character is nicely done, the world is well thought out and the story line is progressing well. And, the writing quality is really good. Well done.
This novel has an interesting beginning. I enjoy how the author set up the main character and how he gains power. I would recommend this book for sure. Only the writing needs a bit of tweaking for this to become a hit.
Don't buy the privileged chapters, they haven't updated anything for almost a month, an this book is most likely getting drop by the T.ffs.
Read this before on wuxia world, and follow the author herself, shes a great writer and this is one of her better works that I loved to the end. Not sure if this is the same translation as the other sites, but its a worthy read nonetheless.
So the goddess is Actually a man...
Its a fun read, lovin the hero. The pace is fantastic, lighting fast without missing any of the good stuff, so little filler. Fights are fun, characters varied, Still in its early stages, but volume one was a 5 star read.
When I saw this book first I really thought it's pretty good. I still think the premise isn't bad, but when I try to read it I feel like I'm draining my braincells. (For example even though they live in china he has 3 sisters...) The MC is an absolute retard and the great company whose products he should review acts completly irrational. His sisters are funny tho. But still overall not readable for me.