Lord of Chaos.
Novel Info
  • Author:
  • Lemn
  • Status:Ongoing

Summary

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A 25-year-old man with a chaotic, disorderly and antisocial life tries to survive an invasion of the earth, which makes public a war between superior beings.
The earth will have the support of the system, a technological advance developed by the god Techno, but the earthlings will soon realize that they can only save themselves and they will try to understand what is this Chaotic Universe in which they live.
Viktor, the earthling who accumulated more chaotic energy will be the one who, by an unexpected event related to the eye of a powerful being, will be able to gain the power to try to discover the truths of this universe.

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I am not a native English speaker, so I may have some grammatical errors at first, I will try to fix them when I could.

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The characters and events portrayed in this novel are completely fictitious. Any resemblance to real people, living or dead, or to real events is purely coincidental.

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Hello, I am the author.

The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting.

I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that.

I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel.

I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic).

The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.
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You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience.

In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.
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Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel.

Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
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I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing
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Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
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The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
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