This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.
Hi, This is my new novel besides "Having Confidence in Another World" (shameless advertising) I edited and fixed some errors for more comfortable reading experience.. I hope you guys like this novel.. Always leave a comment on each chapters or give a review for me to get motivation to write more..(ง'̀-'́)ง
Well at the very least the idea for the novel is rather new and is one of the more unexplored sides of Webnovel, let's see how the author handles the execution of the plot.
Very very very very very very very good. Idk just haven’t seen many like it. Plot was interesting, but it transitions a bit slow. I hate waiting weeks
the setting and characters is gripping and addictive and very well written.But I'm a little disappointed that it's so short.but good work author
So... this was a thing huh. There are so many things wrong with this novel that it's unreadable for me. Unfortunately, compared to the other choice I voted for this one back then. What a horrible disappointment.It's boring. Just another self-mast*rbatory story for the author. Funny enough, at the end of chapter 10, MC claims to finally be an "alpha". That's one of the saddest thing you would have expected a delusional beta to say; try harder lol. MC is impulsive and often shouts/yells (everytime he talks, it's "cried") instead of just speaking?Plot holes and plot armour galore in here.-People who plays the game never need mental rest (needs no sleep), and do not suffer from mental exhaustion. -Game servers only open for 8h every night...? Why the hell would the latest, most popular game do that? Servers should be open 24h so anyone can play whenever they want, instead of being forced to wait until 10pm to play the dumb game. I wouldn't have bothered to buy the game if this was one of the rules for it.-The story development is non-existent. Story is flat, dull and bland. There's no fight scenes at all, just [monster name] appeared, MC gets exp + loot, "nice". Not even a description of the monster, i guess author makes up for it with literal monster names so you even know what he just fought. Also no one grind 500 mobs in the area, so MC was the first to trigger that mini-boss? Complete BS. If you can do something, pretty sure another lucky idiot out there would have also stumbled upon it. You're not *that* special, boy.-Unbalanced character abilities in creation screen, human was obviously the class to go to since they have so much more "perks". Also the "perks" are pretty unrealistic, it's as if there were only 100+ players playing this game.-Unnecessary info dropping. I know there's a lot of game stuff author want to clear out of the way first, but that was so dry and unnecessary that I just skipped pass it all. I don't need to know about the colour codes of armour etc. No point telling us gold = legendary, it's not like we're seeing one soon and it could be introduced better. Like he can see the stats of this awesome new sword and see it so beefed up and go "Woah! This is some BS legendary stats!" That would have gotten the gold = legendary well across too.-Unrealistic basketball match. There's so many wrong there that I just don't want to comprehend. It was also as boring as the rest of the novel. I doubt the author knows anything about the rules of basketball.-I also don't think author knows how people works. All I see here is robots pretending to be human and cardboard people.Unfortunately, this story is mediocre. It is a good sleeping aid though.
It is unlike any VRMMO novels. It is comparable or equally outstanding as thriller paradise, devil's cage and terror infinity. MC is not too op but his calm desposition and cunning covers his weakness. I highly recommend it.
is it only gonne be the two elfs in the harem. I really like your past work btw. ???????????????????????????????
The good:Translation quality and the stability of updates The bad:Character Design Beauties are everywhereHalf of the top 10 beauties are allies or enemys (China)World BackgroundIs completely overshadowed : -> Building costs, upgradesSrory DevelopmentMc gets everything, wins always and is incredibly luckyInconsistentThe wall had first 3 gates later 4 Mc gets a sword and the sword skill , later its the spear and spear skillLuck of Mc is set to be bad but Mc is incredibly lucky -.-
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Was greatly disappointed by the story. Cover and synopsis make me belive that story will take place at medieval China or xianxia world, but it's in modern world instead, okay, so far I had some hope left as what I waited for is the poison practitioner. What you first think when you hear the word poison? Silent killer, description of some gruesome deaths due to poisoning, may be cruelty and race against the time while detoxification. May be this novel is not that bad, but at least from poison there are just naming and some plot left with nothing from above. You could replace poison with some qi and not much will change at all.
Yah untuk lebih jelasnya sih ane juga kagak bisa diskripsiijnya, cman buku ini enak dibaca kok meski awal2 ane kurang paham apa yg diceritain, wkwkwkTapi sefara keseluruhan mantap kok. Wemoga bisa bikin ceritq yg lebih bagua lagi ya gan, dan sukses selalu