Eden Gulped "Maria Oneesan!"
now I really wanted to give this book a good rating but after a long while of reading the story there was certain ups and downs in the quality. to me that would have been fine if it was the only problem but the author then goes on at chapter 375 Raw Insanity to ruin the plot entirely and make all of the mcs progression for naught . it would have been fine if they had made him stronger In a way after that for his loss as the author said in a reply. But sadly his words of truth were nothing but filthy lies with a mask of good intentions. instead he ruins the mc and I could not bear anymore nonsense from the author so I had to drop after 5 -10 chapters past that point because there was no redemption or reason to ruin his plot. that is all.
While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.
One of the best webnovels out there. the only thing is that i am getting tired of you refering to the 70% of the characters as “that person” and we still dont know their identity , There is a limit for secrets and suspens but there is a lot here That makes my head hurt.
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
This novel in one word, stable. The writing quality has been are throughout the entire 700 odd chapters thus far. Being detailed where it needs to be. This novel excels in word choice and more.Updating stability deserves a 5/5. Its stable. Nothing more needs to be said.Story development. This is for those who don’t want a quick story. It is slow, but each chapter builds upon something. It sets up brilliant foundations although the end goal is still elusive, if there is one, it does well with general building.Character Design. Though there is a lot of them, which does cause issues with developing so many Lifesketcher does a great job. Slowly giving each character in this story something that makes them unique.World background: In my opinion, this is what the author excels the most at. A lot of thought has gone into how this Universe/realms etc works. Although this might be a bit too much for some.Overall this is one of the better novels I’ve read on this platform. Although it will not be everyone’s cup of tea, for those who enjoy this type of novel, the author does honor to it.- :)
It's a great story; I think the plot is so exhilarating!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see more—10 daily updates, please. I just can't stop reading this.
The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.
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good novel, i like it . ????⏫⏩⏪⏫⏫⏫?⏫⏩⏩⏩⏫?⏫⏫⏩⏫⏫⏫⏫⏫⏫⏫⏬?⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏬⏪⏫⏪⏫⏫⏪⏬⏬⏪?⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏬⏪⏪⏬⏬⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪⏫⏪
I wanna give this high marks as the story and characters are interesting, but I can't. As of right now, the last update was 2 months ago and there's only 19 chapters. That ain't cool.If updates start to become consistent, I will be more than happy to change my rating. But until then, sorry.
This is a great book, not as well known as many. The plot development, and characters are wonderful, although the translation is a slight bit off of being perfect, it is still a fantastic read.