I have to drop this story. I tried, but the writing is among the worst I have ever seen. You don't read what you write, because first an ability is called X and in the next paragraph is called Y. Many of the characters are genderless, because you use he and she for the same person. If you rewrite this story with the help of an editor I think it can be a good story.
I had high hopes for this novel since i wanted something that i can just mindless lee read, but as time went on the less i enjoyed it. I thought this would be like a wish fulfillment story but then it turned in to a slow passed slice of life. I don't think those two genres mix well. Since i always see wish fulfillment story's fast pass and fun to read while slice of life is always slow day to day and boring. At first i thought i might enjoy it because i was enjoying it at the start till each chapter started to drag on with mindless dribble about nothing important.Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead: Spoilers ahead:So the Mc gets a skill that will allow him to get double the money back that he spends. So the MC never really needs to worry about money ever again, but yet he still does. He has this bag that he has to pay 1m yuan to open it.( Cash return skill does not work on the bag) Even if he pays that much there may not be anything in it. But he complains about losing 1m yuan if theirs nothing in it yet he can make that much by buying another car.I feel like the author was using the card as word filler because ever chance he got he repeated the same thing everyone knows when he spends money the "Expenditure cash return". Every time they mentioned him even spending money they will mention that skill in a whole paragraph, like we forgot after the 20th chapter of reading the same thing being said multiple times. One part i found it weird since i get why the cash return skill wont work on the bag but why did it not work when he purchased jade rocks? He does make allot of money from the rocks but then his parents take away most of his money because he's to young even though he's legally an *****(19yOld). Idk kind of put a bad taste in my mouth by how his parents treated him like a kid.When you first read this novel he goes on a shopping spree and spends lots of money after he gets that skill. Then later on he's just sitting in a car for like 15 chapters talking to a girl he highered to be the driver. While going around finishing a mission he got that has him visiting different monuments. Like that's some boring as missions you would only read in a slice of life type story.I was hoping this would be one of those novels were he does things that he wants and he unintentionally becomes famous. But none of those things has happened yet. this seems like an obvious harem as well since every new person he meats seems to always be a girl( i don't hate harems).I was wondering why this novel was only at 4 stars and going down. Now after forcing myself to finish reading it, i know why. The tittle is misleading you think its going to be a fun wish fulfillment but turns in to a slow paced slice of life, that's super boring and nothing interesting actually happens.
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Good.
I just gotten to know reading past the mother daughter killing. It made me feel frustrated. I thought you mean controlled by the knife or losing some kind of emotion don't know. but he somehow have feelings for Julie. Who wipe the floor with his sorry ass literally and he doesn't have any kind of emotion to this act actually he likes. not feeling somehow how we know he feel pain in his heart when he tries to escape after they figure out he is the killer and confront Julie I just can't continue Reading after I read this this kind of b******* no offence to the author but I'm really frustrated. you should use some kind of spaces to move the paragraphs because I'm using text to speech to listen to The story . And this is my first review on this site.
Excellent story with a growing mc. It has a sci-fi futuristic setting yet with the mc that is arrogant. Enemies aren't braindead as people at least talk as if they are people but still not so complex
Really good novel so far. Keep up the good work dude.....Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Excellent book so far. full of potential and most probably it will become way more popular with more chapters to follow.#~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~#
This book is like most cheat protagonists. But this story is written in a more slowly and clearer way (Better way). Instead of others story the protagonist actally tells people that he didn't do it on his own like there an extra force helping him. And his friends also get help from people.
Hard to find fault with this book in terms of writing quality. The quality is very nice. The chapter lengths are long but the paragraphs are nicely structured so it is easy to follow and keep track. The story and character development is really well done. Although the idea is very simple, the writing makes it a nice read. Really worth reading in my personal opinion...