I loved this story! The alternate ending neary made me cry. I love how the characters were designed and how they grew, and I really hope there is a sequel or will be one, one day possibly. It was such a lovely story.
now let me is this story a copy from my favorite novel common you have not even changed the title. and have no one noticed it yet ? and webnovel is nothing going to do?
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I like this type of story with detectives, cases, and a spice of supernatural, so this story is right up my alley. The beginning is well written, and I have a good impression of the characters so far.
The world background still hasn't been uncovered much, but I think it won't be bad so I'm giving it 5 stars in advance (I have high hopes for the author).
The only thing that's bothering me is the writing quality. At most I can say it's average and it's good, but I think it's better to find an editor/proofreader or use a software to help fix some mistakes.
That's all. In the end, I DO recommend this story because it will be a good read once it has more chapters.
guys this is a hot potato, once the mc tries to get spiritual energy back on earth with the help of the chinese government, well lets just say that people will be distinguished by their ethnicity and where they live.
Tricky.
I don't know why such sad backstories make me sick of this, so much so that I'm ready to quit the novel, and I don't care that in the future you will somehow "change" his character, I don't care. After all, this does not happen in life, and I have enough of it, mc garbage.
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Great story, glad I clicked it, no over board drama and weird guy grinding points from s*x, the system isn't annoying but actually helps him in his daily life. The MC personality is kind, calm, and collective but has his issue here and there, he is not perfect. The girls and other characters are so open-minded and not annoying like other novels.Overall, the story is my cup of tea.(sorry if I have grammar and spelling mistakes, English is my second language)
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Although only the first chapter, it was good. It’s interesting with good details and descriptions. MC although we didn’t get a good grasp of him yet he seems good (?) we need more chapters to see.
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