Completed Volume 1: Revelations.What a rollercoaster of a ride. The story was too intriguing, enough to make my poor self save fps to unlock the chapters.Let's come to review. (WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD)Lemon lovers like me are happy cause MC got two waif-us: a bro con and an assassin.Steamy situations arise from time to time, keeping the story fun. I especially like the immersive feeling of reading in the first POV.MC becomes OP slowly. He gets access to his 'golden fingers' that were originally stored in his soul, ig.He even makes some interesting quips when talking to his family members, although internally.***Author-san, make the quips more verbal and give more interaction. I love those.The new arc starts, and the MC+family goes to a new galaxy, Andromeda.Expectations are high, author-san. Please don'tdisappointme.
The book that gat me craving like um digging into some KFC....one of my first books to encounter and trust me when l say it was love at first sight
For people who come here just as a warning don't come here expecting things to what is depicted in H E N T A I all I can say is have an open mind and read the story. Though the MC is a little pathetic at first he will change bcuz there is something called character growth. Just let the author write his story and just read it before passing judgment.
Hello dear visitor!
First of all, let me say thank you for even giving me the chance and clicking on this little story of mine. I’m gonna be honest, this is my second story, and it wasn’t born in the greatest of circumstances. Without wanting to bore you much with the details, I got sick at the beginning of 2021 and spent more than a month in hospital. I felt miserable, thinking that ‘this would be it, this is how my story ends.’
Luckily, I managed to get better and eventually return home. However, during that short period of depression, I sketched up the outline of this story. I loved superhero comics and stories, and I always had this idea to one day make one with my own ideas.
Prime Evolver System is the culmination of these desires and wishes. While I am trying to make something unique and original and not follow the same script of “Everyone has superpowers due to an invasion of some interdimensional/alien hostile race and after a long and arduous battle there was a temporary ceasefire approach.”
Anyway, I’m not trying to name and shame here, just wanted to try to convey that what I decided to do here may not be the already trusted, generic approach, but instead, a unique and unexplored new path. My path. Our path.
Okay, enough of my love letter. :)
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STORY: Although I do not want to spoil anything about it, the main character will a small orphaned little boy called Lucien Shaw. Due to… khm, special circumstances revolving around his birth, he has a pretty rough childhood, ultimately ending in a secret government facility where he spends the latter stages of his youth living the life of an experimental test subject.
He spends 5 years here until eventually something inside him snaps when they finally go too far and sever his right arm…
CHARACTERS: There’s a wide range of cast that I have meticulously flashed out. Each of them has its own personalities, own goals, and desires. Even if it seems like someone at first glance seems boring and 1 dimensional, trust me when I say, there may be more under the hood. ;)
WRITING QUALITY: Ehrm… I know I have an ongoing problem, that I am working my hardest to fix. If you spot an occasional typo or a mistake, don’t be afraid to point it out to me. I will try my best to fix them even if there are 300 or so chapters completed already!
STABILITY OF UPDATES: This is the one that most are usually interested in. :) Just like with my other novel (The Last Primal) I am planning to write 7 chapters between 1500-1700 words each and every day.
If something happens to me and makes me unable to fulfill this mission of mine, I will make sure to let you all know.
WORLD BACKGROUND: Whilst a good chunk of the story will be played in the modern, urban society that we all know, I can’t wait to show you my version of the apocalypse! Not gonna lie, I am a great fan of the theme, and always wished to write a story about it! :D
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In case you have any questions, don’t hesitate to let me know. Like usually, I always do my best to answer every question.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
The mc went from Ye Ping to Su Changyu around chapter 150 onwards for some reason. I dont even know why author did that and the novel ends around 270 or 290+. Novel went from being good to bad in a span of an arc around the ten countries competition.
Deserves more attention... The characters are funny and genuine and the smut atm is good but it focuses more on plot and character development which in my opinion is the better choice... I recommend you to give it a try
Give this a shot. The concept is very intriguing, the plot and the characters has considerable strength to it as well. So far, the Main Character seems pretty decent, a stable mind that can think which doesn't randomly offend every being it sees. The cheat item is also kind of dope and has different twist and quirk which is not present on your average xianxia.
great work
5 star for the mc
5 star for quality and character development
littke rough around the edges but decent read...hope for more updates...
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