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Novel touches upon serious themes, it is romance naturally, a realistic romance that transcends lives and humanity.
The Protagonist is not a hero or an anti-hero, he’s simply a conqueror and an Emperor who was given a second chance since his five Imperial wives ended up being goddesses.
His trial (system) is a challenge and one not to be taken lightly.
Sandoria (the world he must fix) is a world filled with races it has existed for millions of years and in the community it is commonly called the cemetery of gods: Demons, elves, werebeasts, creatures, old gods… they all coexis together with a background that suggests wars www fought through millions of years.
I hope you read this and get engulfed in the oddities and misteries of this world.
Alright then here we go after reading 10 chaps in. The novel has a unique story with an interesting lore of the Gods, definitely a more traditional-driven fantasy but it is quite enjoyable. The dialogues of the characters and their actions shape their personalities quite well, each character is easily distinguishable from the next. However, I advise the author to use more connecting words or conjunctions. The novel doesn't seem to flow very well with single short sentences that appear detached from each other. A few minor grammar errors here and there but it does not disrupt the overall appeal of the story. But I do strongly advise to look into linking the sentences to each other as when reading, it appeared that each sentence was a new single thought that had no relation to the other. That is the only issue that is hindering the potential greatness of the novel. Overall it is a wonderful read! best of luck to the author !
What a way to escape reality! I totally got lost in the virtual world. Wonderful imagination and terrific writing! I highly recommend it this book
I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this.
Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality.
Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel.
The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development.
Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think.
The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent).
And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings.
The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story.
As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story.
For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief.
All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following.
I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story.
Keep up the good work, it's really good.
Premise is fine but plot is rushed and very little is explained, everything goes downhill after the author introduces these two women who’s mere presence alone turns the mc into the biggest cuck you’ve ever seen. It is at that point in the story (around chapter 15-16) you start to notice the quality getting worse with the wish fulfillment from the author going through the roof. Nothing makes sense anymore and it’s best to stop reading. To gain a better understanding of just how bad it gets, read other negative reviews for more info, when it comes to this story I really couldn’t be bothered to write more than this.
Updates are daily. The story quality, both writing and development is awesome. The characters all have their own backgrounds and personalities(even the antagonists!) The mc is a good guy that still cares for his players, even though his environment could change him. The denizens (citizens) of the Abyss aren't all evil, and they act just like any chuunibyou worker in a game store. so its all good
I'm about to do what's called a pro gamer move *laughs evilly*
Okay but seriously, this is my first novel and I'm still inexperienced if you have any advice or critics(good or bad) feel free to tell. Thanks in advance
Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10.
Posted at 29th chapter.
There were some non-cliche parts, such as the female lead being so direct with her feelings, which is kinda fresh. However it still has alot of fillers.
I love this. Not much to say other than folks should give it a read. It is a fan take on the sci-fi tropes that make up the genre and well worth your time.
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Worth checking out if you have some time to spare not the worst thing in the work.
Try the first few chapters and see that's happens.
Then let me know how you got on