Man, is this even real? I mean even at the chapter 1, the story is too fast... I'm still gonna read it actually... Interesting story
I'm about 20 chapters in as is my limit for every novel on seeing whether i will continue reading it and gauging its overall quality. I'm really liking the mixed genre of the novel and how there are so many possibilities towards growth and development. everything from Sci-fi to magick seems possible.
the MC is lamentable at times though, his personality isn't very believable and can seem extremely immature. for being a prisoner he sure is lighthearted... i know he's only suppose to be 19, and that he no longer has his past memories but seeing such child like thoughts coming from him can grow annoying quickly. (is supposed to have regressed but some how knows how to be witty and talk back to the guards? lacks decorum and common sense but remembers non-sense such as actors and short phrases?)
i feel like this novel could be a stellar 5 star novel if the author spent more time rereading the work for mistakes (as most of them can be easily found if the extra time was spent) and if the fourth wall wasn't broken at all.
this novel really has the opportunity to be phenomenal if the serious undertones wouldn't keep getting disturbed mid flow. you have this novel that talks about the lives of others as if they're nothing and how rape and murder could happen around any corner, then out of no where (insert half remembered words or phrases. insert breaking the fourth wall.) it just completely lessens the overall quality of the novel.
if author chose to rewrite this without so much nonsense and fourth wall breaking this could easily make it to the front page for weeks to come.
best of luck to the author though, I'll continue to read it for a while longer to see how the author develops everything...
I love the novel story development and world building is great and I absolutely love the MC and how well it is written
Seriously a wonderful story but hust after 40 chapters the Arthur will stop uploading it and it will remain like this for really long time and no ones knows that the Arthur will ever upload the remaining chapters
Are you tired of I the female lead am fixing this bad boy the 500th novel of this trope on Webnovel. Read this while Stan still has more development than Ez she has to confront her values and ideals to make their relationship work too. If you're looking for a more balanced romance try this book
Website : qidian china
Views : 7.52 million
Rating : 8.2(447)
Chapters : 1333
Status : ongoing
Word count : 3.32 million
author rank : platinum
This series... oh boy. Where do I even begin?
Pros:
- BADASS MC
- Face Smacking!
- Great side-characters
- Good story
- Ok story development
- Ok character development
Cons:
- Slow story start
- EXTREMELY angelic MC
- EXTREMELY dense MC
- Many many side characters
Good book
I am a dog person and I like werewolves over vampires and this novel seems promising . quality of language is good , concept is good , dating is realistic and mc didn't rush things with the girl , mc is not arrogant or dense or a horny teenager ,no young masters yet everything is going all right for now for me this is a light read a little funny and a little bit of romance .
can anyone recommend some novels like this
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