The concept is Great. The execution is amazing. The author takes shows us an alternate scenario that could have happened because of Industrial Revolution and the Wars of Conquest that were raised because of it. The world setting is inspired but still unique.
The author uses naming humor to take a dig at the big shots of the history and mythology. It's a fun read!
I enjoyed it well, the idea of having Alexander in your fictional world is quite interesting and fun. I somehow started it with a serious face and ended up laughing , and wanting to read more. Overall a very nice story. keep it up.
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he's first described to be calculative and apathetic with the exception of his first love. Now its seems like he lacks IQ and is way too immature. he sounds more like a rich brat than a killer whose suffered 7 years.
So overall, this novel is among my favorites at the moment and I definitely suggest giving it a read. (Review at 270 Chapters)As for my ratings:Writing Quality: 4 Stars - If I was only taking into account the early chapters, my rating would be lower, but the improvement was obvious, especially things like fights and character interaction.Update Stability: 5 Stars - The author hasn't missed a day of updatesStory Development: 3.75 Stars - I feel like this one is purely subjective but I think the story development is good. What you will see from this review is that the story, in general, gets better as you read, and the development is the same. Some may think it's too quick, while others think it's slow, I personally think it's logical. More things get revealed as he gets more powerful, rather than all the info being dumped instantly or him being in the dark.Character Design: 3.7 Stars - I'm sure you can predict what I'm good to say here lol. A lot of the characters are pretty basic at the beginning and there really isn't too much there, but if I were to only take into account the current most recent 160-180 chapters (this review is at chapter 270), I would say it's a 4.5-5 star. A lot of the characters have developed well and personalities make a lot more sense. That being said, the personalities and characters weren't bad at all, there simply wasn't much depth to them at first.World Background: 3 Stars - Currently, this is the weakest aspect of the novel but it kinda makes sense. Some people reading have the misconception that the current overarching plotline is all there is to the story, but the author has said a few times that this is just one section of it. That being said, while there is some mention of the important locations, things like the Abysses, different parts of Earth, or simple things like how people live/how life is there are glossed over. Again, it's getting much better and things are getting described in more detail.Overall - The story is good from the beginning even though it's a bit basic in some aspects. This improves as the story progresses, and it is one of my favorite novels to read currently. I suggest you give it a try.
Plot 4/5Character Development 5/5Romance 4/5 (Hated the point where he changed her memories)Comedy 5/5 (It's perfect, not too much)Action Scenes 3/5 (Need more improvement)It's a soild 4. There are a few things that author should work one but still I'm really loving it so far. Author did said it's a HAREM and as a fan of decent harem novels. I think it'll be a good one since author is very skilled in explaining characters..sigh idk why It's so underrated smh.
Ooohhhh op. no plot, bad translation. overall please avoid to preserve braincells.No Seriously. This novel is so dumb you might as well read a machine translated Novel on another site.
I love how intriguing and brief the synopsis is. I've enjoyed the very few chapters I've read so far. The writer has done a great job on this. Big up!
this really is one of the best free novels I have ever read period; just everything about it the world building, the character development, the abilities, the power system, the quality of the writing itself everything is phenomenal!the author is also very active in the comment section, which probably doesn't mean a lot since I was the only person in there but I always appreciate it when an author interacts with their audience.(btw this is a re-release of the novel because webnovel glitched and the author couldn't release chapter for some reason, that's why you can't see my comments and why I'm so aware of the story)
I am here to show to my support. Keep working hard. I recommend it.
Ganda niti pre hanip. Recommend ko to sa mga hindi pa naka basa nito. Sa filipino makaka relate kato agad hahaha. Add niyo to sa library ninyo at maaaliw kaayo sa pag basa. Yun lang salamat
Looks fascinating, cant wait for a mass release!****filling stupid limit****************(**************(**********************************