I apologize for not being a fan of the “SYSTEM” crutch. My Werewolf System doesn’t copy and paste pages of “system” data, instead it is woven seamlessly into a few paragraphs with amazing skill and forethought. The story is unsurprising about a werewolf protagonist from a poor background. Like many werewolf teen stories, it centres around Gary, his social problems and his friends.
What keeps this novel from leaving my grip is the world of gangs and gang violence that the author draws us into. Organized crime that has insinuated itself into every corner of alternate earth society, from the upper echelon‘s of government to school yards. If this doesn’t get your attention, did I mention the Marvel Universe Mutations, humans altered with Animalism DNA modifications? I guess I should have lead with that and not wasted your time better spent reading this thrilling story.
First of all, congratulations on writing this. I liked it overall, although I felt a bit strange because of your writing style, which is not bad but still rare to see (something similar) here. Though I'm not very into heroic plots, it was an entertaining read, I wish you keep up your good work.
Just changing the name.its nothing new. the orginal name is bringing the farm to live in another world and funny thing is you can read it translated up to 1900 ch (Copy comment +1 this doesn't deserve more)
Not really fan of MCs who bring their knowledge of modern era to traditional era. It kills the joy of cultivation worlds. It messes with how the world works and all. That is pretty much only thing I have against this novel.
I say the only problem i have is your Grammar?? i guess, cuz I'm kinda confused every now and then. But overall it's still passable, I'm still at chap 26 soo, still gonna continue!
There are minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad so far, I enjoy the writing a lot so far and hope I get to see a lot morae in the future
Super cute love story! The hero and heroine work great together, and it’s fun to watch them fall in love. The hero’s friends are adorable and super funny.
I'm usually never on Webnovel anymore so take my words with a grain of salt. I've read the raws up to chapter 300 and the main thing that you'll recognize is the fact that there are no other generations other than the elder generation and the younger (mc's) generation. This is a big problem in many cultivation novels, especially when you have an event that decides the leader of the entire domain that takes place every 800 years, but only those who are under 30 can participate. This is incredibly illogical and I'm not sure why the author does this. Another thing to note is the absolute rizzthat the mc has. Romance in this novel can be simplified into a plain harem, such that the process for love in this cultivation world only equates to 1. love for a man and 2. the man must be handsome and strong. It's not complex type of love, and it's for sure not uncommon, which is why this novel does it terribly when you realize all the rewards that the Mc gives (except for the disciples of the sect) are all women. The author has a personal bias, and although the gift-giving can be used as a plot device to instigate love, I would think that instead, a harem should involve a complex net of emotions that tie all the individuals involved together. This novel does not do that as of yet, and the women that are dao companions of the MC default to "he is so handsome and strong so he will get more women other than me" and completely accept it, without respite or jealousy, which I find unnatural and amusing.Last thing that saves this novel is the cheat, which is no different from any of the same kind, but with any cheat cultivation novels I enjoy it's about the same experience. Really all that matters to me is whether I enjoy the cheat, and I did, so it's alright. Still pretty garbage tho.
love the book it is just sad tjat I can't read past page 40
I wanna see a new novel but a different god :)
Hey, just made an account to review your work! Goodluck and hope you upload daily! Some of the content is actually different from the usual zombie scenario. First time reading about something that the MC is prepared when it happened.
Good novel
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