Loving the story so far, please add more detail when you create your world. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
Like the story and MC so far. MC is witty and smart. Will check in again after the novel has more chapters. Many authors drop novels on this website.
I already read in Portuguese until about the 70th chapter or almost. My tip, a bos launch rate is essential here. It does not matter if the story is good but the launch rate is bad because if you do not treat the audience seriously the novel is not going to get public. Readers are equal drug addicts, we will give you our power stones in exchange for the chapters, we feed and make us addicted to your novel, then you will have a loyal audience. A good launch rate will ensure public, public guarantees power stones, which in turn ensures ranking position and the higher the position in the ranking the more readers attracts. It is a cycle, feed it and you will succeed, after all your novel is great, the translation I am not able to evaluate properly.
I'll be rooting for you, for your novel and for the success of both.
one of my favourite novels om this app. good concept and better execution. it has a bit of wuxia cliche but it doesn't bother me too much.
extremely generous mc, mc is basically Jesus, sacrificing him self for the women who don't get enough pleasure. God bless his soul
Mall cops with 1/10th of the tech available would have found your main villain ... but the mc and all his AI's are somehow unable? srsly?Terrorists operating with sticks and stones manage to make fools out of a global spanning technological Empire?
I read it and it is actually pretty good the main character's personality is a little shameless with him stealing from other powerful beings with his system and you can find Pikachu in the novel.
awesome story with op-mc
Interesting novel, butchered by translator. The MC (in the raws) is called Sun Jin and he isn't former navy SEAL, and he has nothing to do with FBI. It even has nothing to do with USA, all the names are Chinese.
Amazing. The mc is badass and is the person every man aspires to be atleast once in their life. I really like this, because during an apocalypse, with levelling up and getting stronger, I always hated how the mcs take care of weaklings. I mean they are no use, you can get stronger and stronger, so stop wasting time with them, sure you only really care about a few people, but why do you have to take care of random people too? This one he just straight up said **** you! Then went away and separated from the weaklings. Very satisfying. I also like this because I share the idealogy of the mc, "I am not a lone wolf, and I don't hate being a lone wolf, it's just that the others are useless and that's why I am alone." Author, just continue writing, you're doing a great job. To the readers that are hesitating to read this, just know that I have read my fair share of apocalyptic setting novel, and not reading this would be your loss, this has great potential to be a masterpiece.
Interesting premise and the power the mc gets it pretty interestingand has potential. However, Thats as far as compliments go with this novel. The world is not interesting and charcters and scenarios are cliched.
The MC and his friends are the weakest aspect of this novel. They are supposedly seniors in high school yet they are described and all act as if they are middle schoolers, which are one of the most annoyig group of people. The MC is specially annoying, acting like an asshat sometimes, while a nuisance at others.
The situations so far are dragged out and are a bore to read. Ten whole chapters were wasted on this forced date/hangout with the future female lead that added nothing to the story besides making the MC look like an unlikeable douch. I would understand his behavior if he was in middle school or early teens but not someone thats soon to be applying To university. At that age I would expect some level of awareness of ones own actions.
Overall, very cliched story with interesting premise but unlikable characters, boring world and predictable plot. This is the standard for Webnovels so i shouldnt be surprised. Nothing will be lost by skipping this story or even reading and dropping it half way through. It isnt memorable or remarkable in any single facet.
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