truly a hopeless novel and trash and retard MC and nonsense plot story.
I don't understand why the authors of this genre of the novel insist on making the MC dump and dumper with each passing chapter and plots will become more and more nonsense
Like always we have a super Idiot, retard, dump with no common sense, and this situation will become ort and worst as the story goes on. Jut in the 20th chapters and it's like a crazy person.
Webnovel must pay more attention to the novels it chose.
Read till Chapter 85
Words cant express the greatness of this novel (i dont know how to write reviews)
MC is an nascent soul stage expert and is one of the powerhouses in his kingdom His system lets him advance in his cultivation as his apprentices reach higher realm OH IMPORTANT POINT the mc still cultivates normally even though he has a system Our MC also has a mysterious background as his memories area hazy
Yea yea i know my review is bad just give this novel a shot and i am sure you i will love it
honestly, I'm only a few chapters in but I am already in love with this. To put my thoughts simply, everything, especially the characters, feels real. There's also some really clear and well-done worldbuilding as well, and I love the way that the gay community is represented in the first few chapters! It just feels genuine to me, which is something I enjoy reading and something I attept to get in my own stories (none uploaded anywhere, I'm too scared, so also kudos for uploading this), but yeah. overall, despite how little I've seen of this, it's well written, with realistic characters and a really great dynamic, 5/5!
This is one of the types of novels that i enjoy and im glad that this is my next choice for reading after i finish my current ones. I hope that it is as good as i think it is but i have faith.
Hahaha the story is funny, especially the main character who is a bit stupid.
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A beautiful cover page! I really like the black and white tone that gives the cover its character. A nicely written story. The plot is intriguing, the characters are expressive, with interesting descriptions and well-written dialogues. Well done!
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Ok, I will be honest with you all, this web novel is interesting and is going to become one of the famous ones, if it gets more chapter. The reason is pretty simple, it's because of the story and MC. Generally, MCs are naive and wimps but here our mc is too powerful, clever and ruthless. The story revolves around our mc trying to save his love. I believe its gonna be one heck of a story.
Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.
Excellent storyline, Great character growth, a gripping story from beginning to end. Definitely recommend this novel a brilliant read!!!!!!!!
the system is very convenient, it always says everything the protagonist needs, he doesn’t need to think, the levels don’t make sense the protagonist in level 1 can beat a group of goblins with levels between 5 to 15, because several classes it’s obvious which he will choose. it was better to just be born with it. I scored 3 because it has a certain potential, I will continue reading