SecretivePlotter0
Good.
The world building is realistic & logical. After 50 chapters, there is still no stereotypical trope of using modern knowledge to make glass/ gun/cement to speed up civilization nonsense. The MC understands that he has to use this world knowledge of magic with modern society ideology of social structure to build his kingdom.
I know, as the author, my rating doesn't count as it's bias, but I thoroughly enjoy writing these comic novels and am also very please that it's been read over 15,000 times. I'm not sure how the analytics work, but I'm just glad people like it and add it to their collections. If you haven't read it yet, and added it to your collections, then I hope you enjoy. There will be more volumes with different heroes and villains coming.
This book it is really interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Really Really Good Book.
PETS ARE FUCKING AWESOME. AS LONG AS THEY ARE NOT AS SHAMELESS AS THE CATS FROM AM I A GOD? JOKE, I LOVE THEM, BUT I LOVE CUTE LETS MORE. HIYAHHH!
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First off, despite the rating this is not by any means a bad story, it has issues but it has qualities of redemption.Firstly the writing quality, I understand English is not everyone's first language but this book screams machine translation. Poor grammar, misspelt words that sound the same vocally abound. Quite frankly I got through half the released chapters (37 actual, 4 Q & As) and was gonna drop it on how badly the engrish became. Honestly author including the abbreviations and the full word in several places shows a distinct lack of proof reading.Story Development, decent if rushed. Typical zombie apocalypse yet there is literally tons of unanswered questions on how John spreads the virus worldwide from one hick town.Character Design, I literally dislike everyone. John, Dixie, Alexia, Alice, James, Candice... all prime characters who lack any relatable or endearing quality. John starts off as a tragic hero MC but soon goes full angst evil bitch.Updating Stability, from what I've seen updates happen, my biggest issue is wasting chapters on question and answer sections, seriously webnovel books have a specific chapter setting for this sort of thing that does not require breaking up the story or having 41 chapters but the latest title being chapter 37. LEARN TO USE THE SITE AUTHORWorld Background... nothing is explained. Yes its the world we live in but everything is just FBI this, police that. The zombie general attacks the white house which seems to lack any defenses just so the author can massacre president "Grump". Alot is glossed over to force plot.In closing, the book isn't bad. The premise starts off great... its just i feel someone coated the sled bottom in no stick spray before rushing down the hill, the speed is going at break neck pace with no ability to enjoy the ride. When it stops it won't be to a kid laughing in wild fun, it'll be to tears on a good premise rushed and squandered.
Damn even I want to serve a Beautiful master like that. By the master wants to take advantage ? our MC.Joke asides I am single and available ?This Novel fun and Good.it has interesting Comedy.You guys will surely Enjoy a good time.
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its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please
Why isn't there any more chapters coming it's been more than a month and I'm thirsty for new chapters plz update it daily or a tleast frequently
Story is pretty good. The way that he awakens his powers may make you want to turn from the story but if you just ignore that the rest of the story is pretty good so far. I would recommend giving it a shot.
