2spooky4me .
Love it just work on the translation a little better lol
Love the direction that the story is heading. Keep up the good work
This story is good the characters are nice the description of each character and the way each character behaves fits the story and because of that the story is unique.
I can't wait to see how this story ends
See monopoly is a game for children to develop knowledge. Of course the author wrote this children's book. The biggest revolution of the internet was the ability to allow adults to read children's books in a way that fills a personal individual void without the backlash of judgment and censorship from society.
I got to chapter 17, and will just say that I'm confused. I understand the general plot, but everything feels jumbled together with no proper flow. the relationship between MC and the succubus doesn't even make sense to me.
Hopefully the book gets better, but as of now I rate it mid to low mid.
the synopsis is like chinese novel i have read, mc have mysterious technique and betrayed by his disciple after that attacked by 7 or more people and reincarnatet in the body of servant of young miss
Great story, thanks for all your hard work! The last time I enjoyed a story this much, was a few years ago. When "Mother of Learning" was being written.
A Unique Concept. I really like the little bits of quotes at the beginning.
This novel is on the leve of lotm , reve insani and the legendary tyrend
this novel is better than other mindless system novels, but still need to improve character development, dont drop because you can improve
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Everything is good. Characters, system, background and even the system.
Overall, amazing!