don't waste your time on this pile of garbage................................................................................................
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. 5* on everything except the translation (which sucks big time!)Unfortunately it seems to have been left at around chapter 240 here, u can read the rest on MTL (just Google search it, you'll see comrademao.mtl link). Has some really interesting uses of some mons (especially Tyranitar who has been given some powers of Groudon). Use of Psychic is pretty impressive too.
I wanted to like it, I really really did. But it’s incredibly boring. Info dumps, redundant words, face slapping fodder, face slapping young masters, face slapping the world… Read at your own risk…
Gonna say, this is one of the best VRMMO stories I've had the pleasure if reading, character is relatable and down to earth, but not to the point of being stepped on by others. Not prideful to the degree of tearing down what others build out of spite, and has a strong sense of loyalty to those who've done right by him. Might not sound like much in this context but the author does a great job following his characters adventures in an apathetic uncaring world with few Ray's of light to illuminate his path.Next is story for me. Vaguely as I can without spoiling is that this story is in a well constructed world, both for the characters reality and the virtual reality, there isnt any good or bad people that most writers do their best to polarize and apply, the relationships and people of this book are just as complex and understandable as the main character. Everyone has their own reasons and are bound by their own circumstances, certainly their are a few scattered arrogant thugs but that run around in the story, but it's not all that impactful to the world, main character, or flown of the story, So what I'm saying is that this story is well thought out and is very well constructed, its humorous, its tragic, its thrilling, its tense, it has a lot put into it and is an enjoyable read.If I were to say anything bad about it, story release is chaotic at certain times, sometimes will be one a day or go to one a week. Changes quite a bit xD but I'll give it to the author anyway because the story maintains its quality, atleast to my eye.
Anyone know the raw?
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I ONLY read 7 chapters but here are my thoughts :the writing is not bad. i would say good english.the story is moving forward fast paced without any kind of background info for the character(s), place, world, and there are contradictions or just stupid set up to try to make a situation were there would ve none. would have been a 1.6 but since i don't know the update speed i took 3 stars there. not really worth the read unfortunatly. fun conzept that could have been a great chill story
One of my favoirite books of all tome. Aaron is such a unique character and the author crafted him so well. This is also a psychological genre that'll take you write into our protagonist's head. It's just so authentic. He is in a dark pit of despair, but can he find his light? Find out by clicking that READ!!?
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The novel is ok but the grammar kills it like when ur grammar is wrong it changes the meanings of the words and what u are trying to tell in ur story may get interpreted as an another thing I suggest u use grammarly to edit ur chaps.
This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.