PrimordialMaster
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Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writingStability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapterStory development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too oftenCharacter design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet?World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.
Worth reading, amazing book and writing imo. It's super immersive, the character development and plot are constantly enticing/intriguing/creative. It's mysterious, funny, cute, silly, creepy and dark at moments. It's worth your time frThank you to the author!!!
Webnovel isn’t letting me paste the review that I had written. It won’t even let me put up the 3 pages as a photo. ?In summary, this is NOT the worst novel I’ve ever read, but there are many other better ones out there.
Recommended it reminds me of I'm a spider so what? but this one has more seriousness I want more! Love you author!
Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.
Thanks for the original hosting site WUXIAWORLD and the one who started the translation of this great novel. If you want to know that this novel is good ..... well go read the review in novelupdate and decide by yourself. BTW why this novel posted in qidian ? as far as I know this novel should be the right of wuxiaworld, right ? sorry for my ignorance because I do not see any statement from Ren (Wuxiaworld)
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Whoever likes Sign-In Buddha's Palm, vote for this! This is a great, and for-reals low-key OP MC. Although not as low-key as Buddha's Palm, so far there are no signs of the MC exposing himself, or the frustrating 'hinting that the OP guy is actually me.'
Really good story, like I am Really a Superstar but without a super nationalistic mc. Very funny I consider it a comedy and enjoyed. Please release more chapters
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Ok, the story has a good premise, ok background and meh characters so far, but a MAJOR problem is how the author implements the mc’s growth, he makes the mc seem useless stupid so he can learn new stuff, yes it is a good way of doing stuff but why do you have to make the mc so stupid instead of making a harder challenge. So far the mc is deemed a ‘genius’ but he’s retarded in every aspect, he doesn’t even use his past life knowledge to it’s worth. Might as well have the mc be a thinker instead. It becomes more noticeably the more the story goes on. The mc only uses the logic and equations and some random ideas from his past life. And I know the author doesn’t want to have the mc to be OP but that doesn’t mean the mc has to be retarded, you know give him less power rather than make him stupid. Oh and the grammar is terribly, he some how messes up the important words but get the filler words almost perfect... like he is trying to annoy the readers.Welp, best of luck readers to this book.
