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shameless author who delete all reviews with less than 3.5 stars, u can see for yourself. story bad written, inexistent grammar, lame world building and clichè system
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The rhythm of the novel is slow but that’s a slice of life novel, so it’s supposed to be that way.
The author utilize the characters very well.
And it’s noticeable as the chapters go on that the novel becomes better and better.
Review written after reading up to the last chapter as of posting (chapter 149).
Honestly this is the best piece of writing I've ever read, the review will be divided into parts.
1.Josh
2.Other characters
3.The world
4.Story
1. Josh both caries along the whole story and also just feels like a viewpoint for the rest of the world. He manages to be funny in a very human way rather than just saying "he told a joke and they laughed". He has depth and background as a person but also has more aspects to him, he can be realistically funny, sad, happy, desperate, and even clueless. Do you know how hard it is to write a clueless character that doesn't make you cringe? I have never seen a more human feeling character that still has unrealistic strength and perseverance.
2. The side character all have real personality, real devotion and reasoning. They complement Josh just as much as thy do the story or world-building. They create a place, community, and group that doesn't just feel like an excuse to leave the tower. The author never creates a scenario or relationship just to throw it away and forget about it. It truly feels like they're a society with groups and levels rather than just MC, MC friends, MC enemies, everyone else. Which is what a lot of novels tend to create.
3. The world is less of an aspect than you might expect from what I've already said. The world in the novel is defined less by easy or literal descriptions and more by the characters and relationships. It doesn't matter where exactly the cities are, where exactly the tower is, where he even lives. You learn about the general world, technologically advanced human world that had a tower show up randomly, but then the characters teach you about the rest. I don't know where districts of the city are, but I know how the characters feel about the areas and what the place feels like instead of what it looks like.
4. The story is simple, it isn't meant to be about the mystery of the towers or the other worlds, it isn't about Josh's struggle to survive. It's about Josh, just Josh. It's about understanding him, how he proves he can do this, how he thinks in an unorthodox way and influences the people around him. It's the story of Josh Malum and his adventures, both personal (climbing the tower, finding something other than his girlfriend to care about) and public (teaching people, changing the tower, gaining attention, helping his friends). I don't think I can do it justice trying to condense it down into this tiny little review, but I 100% recommend reading this.
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Pretty good story. It is short but I don't think that the length does a disservice to the story. It doesn't harp on things that have no impact on the story
A really interesting story, but somewhat vague. I am not 100% certain about the whole story background, but hopefully, we will receive more information as the story develops
This is probably in the top 3 most enjoyable harem novels I’ve read.
The main selling point being the charcters actually feel real.
Each FMC has personaility, motivation, goals and feelings which creates realistic feeling interactions, all of which are enjoyable.
The action is good, the romance is great, the story overall is fantastic. Stop reading other harem trash where girls have 2 brain cells and tap into this marvelous story.
Хорошая, и очень лёгкая новвела, можно почитать и отдохнуть. Хоть фантазии многовато, но при этом рамсказывают жизненную ситуацию. Надеюсь автор продолжит публикацию.
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Harem seems really likely which is a huge minus. A lot of this was hard to read, not because of the translation but because of the really bad characters. The ML is almost inhuman. He lacks the ability to have emotions, or at least display them. He is embarrassed at work so he has to quit because ... ? The FL feels similarly strange. I get that she is supposed to be bad at interacting with people but her reasoning for things is just strange. She is pretty so she is wary of people being nice to her. Sure makes sense. The next thing mentioned is that the MC was nice to her once and so she stalked him down and forced a first date. Again, it was just jarringly off.
The story seems to be moving in the direction of one man with tons of OP lovers who rely on him totally while he is totally independent and has tons of secrets. It is cliche and really not fun to read at this point. I'll give this one a hard pass.