hello author, it wouldn't hurt if you add more paragraphs describing mc going from one point to another, not just chatty and info dumps.Why not add a narrator pov? Then swift to mc pov from time to time, you read first and second chapter but that was the impression the novel gave me.
You keep repeating the same story over again
Please, I do like the story setting but you keep repeating the same story in a roundabouts way
Book gets worse with time. Plot armour for MC everywhere. No to little personal growth for MC. He has 1 million more brains than us but can’t let his pride take a back seat. Smh
Was good good til the mc turned into a rapist
After reading to chapter 79 I have decided to drop. this story is way to boring and the mc is just... i want to say push over but he is only like 16 or 18, but idk.
has great potential, will be keeping up with the story till chapter 50 at the very least if it continues.
good luck
First I'm quoting someone else's review:
Pretty average. I have finished reading Starting Contracts with Sprites. Both, this and that novel, are in the same niche with having pets for fighting. After reading 15 chapters only, I grew tired of this novel for having similar starting points with only the difference with the system abilities. It still didn't riled up my interest. I will give this an average score for at least making a solid novel but can't really get my interest to keep reading it. Comparing it with food, you can eat it but it doesn't have that umami flavor that will keep you from having second serving.
Who tf asked for this website to "americanize" the novels? They seem to keep doing it even though I haven't read a single review where anyone said they even remotely liked it
I’m lamenting at the missed opportunity for naming the mc “Bob”. If the mc had been named Bob, then...
Bob the builder
Can we fix it?
Bob the builder
Yes we can!
Realy good novel