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This Ian just my kind of story, I’ve yet to really disagree with the mc, he is ruthless and manipulative, it feels nice for a change, he feels like he knows it all and is smart. The story progress at a slow-moderate speed, but the attention to detail in some chapters really sell the story, you should keep writing
Author's been bugging me for quite some time now for a review so here goes.It's good. There's action, there's haŕem and there's weird powers. Some stuff are quite basic and some scenes are dramatic for no reason.But overall, not bad. In fact, dare I say it's good. Ya Happy now, Yet?
There’s only one reason why am making this post and that is I continuously see a whole bunch of people posting about The fact he has no idea what the anatomy of a jellyfish is. And that is perfectly reasonable if you did not read the title of the book. He’s going off the Cthulhu mythos so don’t expect a powerful jellyfish but instead a giant god that has parts resembling tentacles. Your complaints are perfectly reasonable just please remember this is not a jellyfish book it’s a Cthulhu book. If you don’t know about Cthulhu you’re reading this book please look up Lovecraft. The explanation there will provide you what you need to know before deciding to pick this up or not.
I Remember I read this and loved this novel before and stopped because chapters weren't translated...On to the story..Mc gets tricked by a system and is transmigration to a low-level magic world...gets his protagonist halo stolen by system.."He" dies and Remnant soul is born because resentment. Mc is willing to abandon everything for power...Also keep in mind that He is A remnant soul so what makes a person..person is not there,his real soul probably already reincarnated. He wants to become his own person and doesn't care about his "Real self"..His goal is to become god..
You shameless cur. Dont steal works of other. Anyone rewding this just dont. Its not worth it. Original is availiable on royal road for free with more chapter too.
Full support. Please more author. More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!
give it a go, it's engaging.the character are fun to read, they take locial decision most of the time, the MC itself so far takes logical dicisions and the world has live on it's own, stuff happen even when the MC is not involved and it's interesting.my only problem with it, it's the ranking system it can be confusing to know what better and what's worse when they say N-leve technique and what not.
The quality took a tremendously steep rise in quality in Ch 1-20. The story goes into more detail about the cultivation and training process than any novel I read so far. The realism in combat techniques is decent and more than I can ask for from someone who does not train. Better than immortal mortal in every quality, characters, realism, detail, and generally what the rules for the powers of cultivators are. No pointless exposition and a flawed but likeable mc. Author puts time into his chapters and doesn't mass release in exchange for quality. I can see a rise in quality if the author puts more thought and planning into both how the mc develops his skills, interacts with others, and matures over time. Ideas are good, but execution and taking the time to break down every part of the journey in a fun and interesting way is what makes a truly unique novel. A rival / friend that pushes the mc to greater heights is 100% more interesting than the concept of talent. Please, I love your book, never give it up
Love the story. To me it seems kind of jumps all around the place.
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This read is like smoking cigarettes. They feel good, but definitely bad for your health. Why is it bad for your health? The way the translation is butchering my brain cells is...... i cant even.....PLEASE GET A NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKING EDITOR!! (Sorry would-be-editor, you’ll be puking blood much more than us readers)Or please change the goddamn translator.
