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Such a good story. I like the comedy in it too! I wish this novel would get picked up I tried to read it MTL but it was too hard. I think QI wont pick this up either because its not a popcorn novel like all the rest of them.
This thing is one of the olden classics, part of the beginning of us novel weebs. Therefore, i would like to thank this novel for being with us throughout that period of time. Secondly, too many timeskips.
I'm only at chapter 11. Overall it's been alright so far. Don't be tricked by its rating, those are from the bots. It's not bad but not good. I'd give it a 3.5/5. The problem I have with the novel is that it's very vague. There is almost no description of the settings at all. We have no clue what the city looks like or what the mc's workplace looks like. When the mc enter a town, there was no description of what it looked like at all. There is also no backstory of the mc at all. We only know that he came from the earth. Side characters are also very bland. We don't get many interactions between the mc and the side characters. There's also a lot of show, don't tell. An example from the novel is when the mc asked Gu Bo how to tell the difference between beast wounds and corpse puppet wounds, "Starting from a corpse on the far end, Gu Bo pointed at its wound and explained the nuances in a low voice. These were useful and practical knowledge, so Su Jingxing listened closely and memorized everything. When Gu Bo was done explaining, the investigation was still underway". Very lazy writing from the author. Overall, if you're looking to waste your time then this novel's up for that. If you're looking for a quality novel to read then skip this novel. Don't listen to those vague reviewers who give out 4 or 5 stars like it's gold. Unless you're a kid then you probably have no idea how mediocre this novel is.
What the ****? Is this a fucking google translation? Is this a fucking joke? For **** sake qidian and bull**** "translator" get your **** together. You pulled a good one right there releasing half of a chapter in chinese and the other half in **** tier english.Fuck you translator.Fuck you qidian for putting people like that in charge of translation.Fucking Cheers.
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I came into this story to laugh so imagine my shock when I met my girlfriend using the tips inside!!! I didn’t know there were lots of real dating tips before I read the story, but when I read the other comments, I learned I wasn’t the only one to meet girls from this!Even though I still laughed every chapter(this is the funniest novel on here btw, by far), I got more than I ever expected out of it!It was totaly unexpected. People pay lots of money for this kind of sage advice! Thank you author! Please keep writing this unbelievable book!
SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!! Well I enjoy the premise of the story and I quite like Samuel as a character. However I feel it would have been better for him to wait awhile to atleast settle down and actually enjoy having a “father”&”mother” etc. In the first 30 chapters alone he’s gone from being blind to adopted to straight publishing a book now talking about starting a company, it feels very rushed especially considering he’s only been adopted for 1-3months (inc mini timeskip’s) that’s also not considering the fact he’s 10 years old. Well just thought I’d give my opinion i enjoyed what I have read so far.
very awesome im an scp fan myself and i love it. the book and the characters are great, also its very accurate i would love to see him fighting some famous scps.
Such a curious thing this is...The writing is good definitely not reinventing the wheel or anything but compared to other works on here 10/10I actually think the only problem i have with this premise based story is the lack of a centered perspective meaning there is no mc.One last thing we don't know what the story is directly about.Is it how the unveiling of naruto's past will change the future or how naruto will change.
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