Hello, I'm Hongkonger and I'm the author. English is not my first language and difficult to write. There will be mistakes but I will try my best. So, be kind.
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Could barely bring myself to read more than 10 chapters. The first chapter actually hooked my because of the writing quality but the story development is just waaaaay too rushed in my opinion. Also I think the author just contradicts himself. First it seems like magic is a rare talent and only few can learn it and the main character just learns it in a matter of seconds (yes it might be a life and death situation) but still being able to "master" it in 1 chapter seems like a waste. Also I think the MC is pretty dull so was nothin for me, sorry.
the mc is the most apparent problem here, the title is misleading since he's very obviously the sin of envy not gluttony. the entire first 3 chapters are spent practically worshipping the sin of pride and we get like one line about what the sin of gluttony is supposed to be. either the author wanted to write about the pride guy or the author just wants to fill a word count so we spend page after page after page on nothingness while he fills it out. if you can handle pages and pages of empty text just to get a few lines about the wrong character in the story then you'll probably love this
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This book is awesome and cant wait to see whats next but it wont let me comment at the bottom of the page.... Im on chapter 220 and I even tried a couple other and wasnt able to too... I think the server is messed up!
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
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The second worst novel I have ever read. This novel tried to be funny with all the normie memes in it, but it was just too fucking forced to be funny. I would rather fucking kill myself and my entire family then read this disgusting novel again. Author has a ****ed up mind that he probs got from watching the worst hentai on the internet and by being a loser NEET for over 37 fucking years.
5/5 (๑ↀᆺↀ๑)✧What a masterpiece!!! (*Φ皿Φ*)The author's creativity is very well portrayed in this book! (=ΦÅΦ=)Well-written, with good descriptions and awesome lead character! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶I am so glad I came across it! ฅ(*ΦωΦ*) ฅ
Now at I have read it 4 different times I can't keep my mind off of this novel can someone tell where I can find another one like this where the mc is good at all music and artist craft
Will this is a great novel to read, MC is my type that is ruthless and smart, the plot is good and I like itkeep going auteur withe this great work