A heroes journey at this point of time? Respect
pretty good story so far. great detailing on characters and background. it's steady pace reading. not like other novels that are roller-coaster or stop and go.
Love this book beyond,I would definitely use some grammar from this book ,I love the ML ,the character design is great ,the story development is great too honestly I think everything about this book is great . that's way I gave it an overall 5.0 mark .great work Author and all the best with this masterpiece I highly recommend this book.
This is f#cking amazing, the characters are actually f#king three dimensional and this is by far the f#cking best novel of the current trial reads. Just by the first sixty chapters I've gotten invested, grown to love the characters and have gotten to enjoy their goddamn relationships and character dynamics. So yes this is f#cking good and you should read it! Fight me.
It's good story because it's harem(52 wife?????) and other regions like stories background and all (don't go checking heroin's??)I like the way author discuss and discribe the position of wifes and MC, there way of working and thinking BUT ....It's already 2 months and author is still missing and abounding his work
The best story of the month, No, of the YEAR!Very good and detailed, enjoyed every minute of it and will have to recommend it to all my friends!!! /Exp lover
Wow! This is one of the novels here in WN that I read from start to finish. The plot is so interesting, I like mystery novels, and I badly want to know how they'll gonna catch the killer. This kind of story is hard to write and so far the author had successfully hooked me in. What will happen next? I'm counting on you, author!
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the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.
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The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!
Nice writing. U have great imagination author. With constant update, i think this story will be amazing. The story is also very creative. It's very well written. Good job??